ODIPack3 submissions (Release when graphics are done)

[dascookieman]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

captain murasa's ass anchor
awesome!!! haha fun as heell!! a few errors were noticable when playing and there are a bunch more that could improve the file a bit i think, will accept this after revision.

measure 8-9 i don't think you should switch between the sounds like this, i think it can be made really cool if just layered properly
measure 11&15&66&70 it's a 16th minijack on the first 4th? you don't have to have it as a jack if you don't want to though
measure 11&66 the last 16th isn't there
measure 17 you could have a freeze in the middle of the mines or even have some kind of trill to that scream instead of the mines but it's cool the way it is
measure 26&28&30 one 8th too much in the middle
measure 26-30 i would do this entire section differently with the 4ths only being jumps if both the melody and bassdrum hits and not just the bassdrum, when it's just singles to the bassdrum i would try to make this obvious with patterns instead, i doing it that way makes following the melody when playing it easier since now all 4ths look the same regardless of if the melody hits on it or not. but this is a stepping style thing and you can do as you like
measure 31 i think this would also be cooler if you kept the melody and just added singles to the percussion, it'll still become climactic and most of the percussion will become jumps
measure 33 i would remove the mines and add that cool sound
measure 40 the first 16th isnt there
measure 41 you could add 2-3 freezes to the end of this sound
measure 41 you could have a trill to the same scream again if you want to
measure 43 1 more vocal note between the 48th and the jump
measure 42-53 the vocals could perhaps be a bit more on-beat here and there in some parts here but overall it's fine
measure 55 1 missing 16th right after the first 4th
measure 55 why are there 3 jumps it's nothing else there
measure 56-61 if the jumps are to the very subtle snare drum then there are some missing ones. i would just layer the vocals here instead since you'll get a similar looking result and they're obviously much much more prominent. the strings can still give you some 16ths.

danger danger
it's pretty cool, some parts are awesome but it could be a lot better i think and it's inconsistently difficult with that first 32nd burst being sooo much harder than everything else, the rest of the file will be a fairly easy sdp for many but that part spikes in difficulty brutally, it should be toned down. also the ending that has the stuttering vocals should have some kind of ending-climax with minijacks to those vocals for sure! also see to it that everything else is done accurately, and i can see this being accepted


mariostep
the first parts with the 16th jacks is wrong (not the first long one before the 32nds), it was 12ths and a few 24ths in there, it can be made really cool actually. the part with the long double-jacks i don't understand why they aren't singlejacks and then the other layer that played a note every once in a while added instead. it felt pretty dumpy. but it was cool when a few trips came in to that other sound. the long stream had 3 missing notes in the melody in the song but in the file it's a constant stream. the pipe-sound color notes could be 3-4 instead of 2 it sounded like, would be a bit better i think. the end is pretty cool but could also perhaps be more climactic. the song has potential but the file has a lot of stuff that needs to be changed, but it could turn out really cool in the end


(i wanna give you) devotion (revision)
was already accepted but i just had to mention it here because it's so amazing now damn

[Nick Skyline]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

Since "Unconnected." is only available right now to those that competed in Division 7 of the Tournament and cannot be unlocked by anyone, I figured TC_Halogen would be picky about permissions regarding other takes on the song, and whether or not he'd let me step it. I figured he would make me find an alternative, likely for reasons I couldn't figure out. I posted in the "FFR Genocide" thread asking him if I could step it, and he said back:

In my eyes, you never should have to ask a simfile artist to chart a song they have already if you like the song. I'll never consider it disrespectful and personally encourage seeing a different take on a song that I've already done. Go right ahead

In short, GREEN LIGHT!

EDIT: Done and sent.

[Arntonach]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

So we need to work on r, s & t then?

[04im]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

If you take all the accepted stepfiles, the top 3 most appearing letters are:
L: 154 times
N: 118 times
E: 89 times

Le

[blindreper1179]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

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[SKG_Scintill]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

If you take all the accepted stepfiles, the top 3 most appearing letters are:
L: 154 times
N: 118 times
E: 89 times

[04im]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

yes

[SKG_Scintill]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

stepping some virt

[dascookieman]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

sounds like a very good idea

[Shadow_God_10]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

gravestoned
finally i get a working .sm :P! it's a fun, challenging file but it has too much jumps, i feel like pretty much everything is represented by a jump, i think a few parts could be changed to have more flow with less jumps/hands and it would make some of the other parts stand out more as well. a couple of the bursts were also perhaps a bit too much i think

I COULD change some bursts to freezes remove a lot of those jumps and change the heavy chart to Oni so that the insanely good people can score on it!

[04im]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

idk i havent seen any files about fucking veggies

but expect some good-cool files soon

[SKG_Scintill]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

sounds pretty orthodox for stepmania to me

[04im]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

gonna be sending a pretty unorthodox song

i think a lot of people might enjoy the chaotic nature of this song

'bianca freire fucks a few fresh veggies'


preview song here

http://freemusicarchive.org/music/Oxygenfad/Summer/Bianca_Freire_Fucks_A_Few_Fresh_Veggies

[blindreper1179]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

Sent yet another, hopefully this is more stepmanier music than my last submissions. =X

[rparty89]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

zed anyone?

i was bored...