ODIPack3 submissions (Release when graphics are done)

[xVaLoRx]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

i'm assuming light house is the song from DJ MAX so whoever stepped that good job!

[04im]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

earthquake 13
accepted. HOLY FUCK SO AWESOME. really intense and WOW SO much fun!!!!! really great job, a few minor things for you to double-check if you want to: in a few parts not all the jumps were obvious what they were going to, the vocals part should be double-checked because it must be superaccurate because it's so awesome . the part with the quad-trip-jump-single with mines should imo go the other way, to the right. all these things are minor and the file is accepted no matter what.


light house 10
accepted. cool, easy but was memorable and had some really fun parts, never got boring, good flow.

mr lonely
will accept after a few minor revisions. the part with the tons of freezes can't be copy-pasted like that because it was gay enough that all the hard freezes were on the right-arrow while holding an up-freeze the first time, and it definitely shouldnt be that way twice, just mix it up. and i would also prefer if the freezes werent THAT packed together its pretty gay to read. also the part that had 3 or 4 color notes leading into 3-4 consecutive freezes were also copy-pasted and here as well the patterns were not perfect to begin with, mix up the patterns the second time around for this part as well. also it would be cool with some minor layering in the solo perhaps, it would not get too hard i don't think. really cool file just have a quick look at this and i'll accept it.

awwww yiss! i knew you would like earth quake i'll make revisions asap


i'm assuming light house is the song from DJ MAX so whoever stepped that good job!


also shoutouts to ossa for stepping NieN love u

[Choofers]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

sweeeeeeeet

[xVaLoRx]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

light house 10
accepted. cool, easy but was memorable and had some really fun parts, never got boring, good flow.

catkin & teasel
when i saw valor&fission i was like ooooh yeah this must be good... but after a minute or so i was like "wtf.... ?_?". the song must be cut. the first half of the file is not very good for most part. because of the song being so weird you never get into any kind of flow when playing, it has so much odd rhythms and at the same time it's supereasy and boring. the last part was good and there was one cool part in the middle as well but you guys need to cut the song because people would quit out of this before even getting to the good part in the end. i would not feel like playing this again the way it is right now.

not

I can't speak for fission when i say this, but i'd much rather release as a single file or wait for another pack than cut it

[dascookieman]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

catkin & teasel
when i saw valor&fission i was like ooooh yeah this must be good... but after a minute or so i was like "wtf.... ?_?". the song must be cut. the first half of the file is not very good for most part. because of the song being so weird you never get into any kind of flow when playing, it has so much odd rhythms and at the same time it's supereasy and boring. the last part was good and there was one cool part in the middle as well but you guys need to cut the song because people would quit out of this before even getting to the good part in the end. i would not feel like playing this again the way it is right now.

do it this way11
accepted. lmao aweeesome

duffy (wip)
could possibly be accepted when you finish it and cut the song but you would have to get someone else to check the technical accuracy first because i don't have time at this point and many parts was really hard to hear if all the 16ths were there when playing and sometimes it sounded like something else too. also you could represent the sounds with better patterns sometimes i think, when it's mostly 16ths like this patterns are very important

earthquake 13
accepted. HOLY FUCK SO AWESOME. really intense and WOW SO much fun!!!!! really great job, a few minor things for you to double-check if you want to: in a few parts not all the jumps were obvious what they were going to, the vocals part should be double-checked because it must be superaccurate because it's so awesome . the part with the quad-trip-jump-single with mines should imo go the other way, to the right. all these things are minor and the file is accepted no matter what.

ge4ce (revision) 17 20
accepted. sup hardest file in the pack

lemme take you to the beach
i liked a few parts of this, one part pretty early with a bunch of color notes, the part in the middle with the 16th stream that represented what was going on in the music very well and the color note jumps section afterwards, and there was one cool part towards the end too. but overall it's too boring with just sooo many 8ths and the short 24th and 16th bursts between them here and there, it's not that much fun and it gets old really quickly. you would have to make some kind of patchwork cut of the song for me to accept this, but if you do this well, i will accept.

leraine
zzZZZzzzZzzz. it's way too easy and boring. technically perfect it seemed, the patterns are also very good and represent the sounds perfectly, but the file is waay too easy for this pack

light house 10
accepted. cool, easy but was memorable and had some really fun parts, never got boring, good flow.

mr lonely
will accept after a few minor revisions. the part with the tons of freezes can't be copy-pasted like that because it was gay enough that all the hard freezes were on the right-arrow while holding an up-freeze the first time, and it definitely shouldnt be that way twice, just mix it up. and i would also prefer if the freezes werent THAT packed together its pretty gay to read. also the part that had 3 or 4 color notes leading into 3-4 consecutive freezes were also copy-pasted and here as well the patterns were not perfect to begin with, mix up the patterns the second time around for this part as well. also it would be cool with some minor layering in the solo perhaps, it would not get too hard i don't think. really cool file just have a quick look at this and i'll accept it.

ray of darkness
would accept after a pretty major revision since it was challenging and some parts were really fun, but some parts were not good. the beginning needs better technical accuracy, missing notes here and there. the single 8ths part in the middle was too boring and i don't understand why it was not much more heavily layered when there was so much more there in the music. the next part with the single 24ths is terrific and the patterns really rule. but the next part with the 24ths leading into hands was too hard and there is no reason for there to be hands like that, it's not fun, make them jumps instead and make the patterns easier.

requien for a team
really fun, challenging in a fun way and good length, it ends really weirdly abruptly though? the beginning part with the color notes to the violin sometimes had a missing note at the end of the short melody-section. this is my only complaint, fix it and i will accept

rip roar power 16
what did you just do to my wrists.... not too amazing lol but accepted because it's hard and the pack needs more really hard files.

space is key theme song16
accepted. INTENSE. really creative superhard file wow good job man. so many superhard files submitted all of a sudden what the hell, awesome.

the bridgeport run 15
accepted. terrific. another superhard file wtf. also really creative even though really hard, great job!


edit: oops the random numbers are the foot ratings i'm putting them as, might as well leave it there

[baq12]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

Going to finish my last and absolute last submission when I get home. It'll probably be my most difficult submission, but super fun too!

[dascookieman]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

home now. gonna try to play all the submissions today

[Dj_Ossa]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

Sorry for double post.

Sent my file Glove, sorry I fucked up twice sending the email, the third email only has the final .sm file. I apologize bro haha but I'm somewhat of a n00b with SM5 and shizzle.

[Dj_Ossa]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

Me

I'll send you an updated link, I'm fixing a few things.

[Xx{Midnight}xX]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

With the new graphics made, I went ahead and just fixed Transparent World and added the graphics to it and everything. I sent it to the submission e-mail.

[Wayward Vagabond]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

Anybody wanna play my file? I need a second opinion

Me

[Xx{Midnight}xX]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

Also I am unsure if I fixed this in the resubs or not

But according to my preview video I didn't, but if it's not to much trouble for you, can you fix the song artist for Transparent World?

As of right now it reads as "Rigel" which isn't completely wrong, but it doesn't give all the proper credit it should. The proper credit would be "The Rigel (Ft. Hatsune Miku)"

If it's too much trouble I can shoot a quick fix, but I figure it'd take less time to do it by hand than dl the fix and replace the .sm

Sorry for the mistake on my end.

I cannot believe I didn't fix that, I feel like a jack ass 'cause I'm such a stickler about it on TS when I judge. I also feel bad cause it's not proper credit. It's like pimp slapping the author(s) in the face and that's just uhg so bad.

[04im]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

pm mediafire link thanks u

[Dj_Ossa]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

Anybody wanna play my file? I need a second opinion

[04im]

Re: ODIPack3 submissions (May 18th deadline!)

need feedback on earth qauek pls ty