Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

[gnr61]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

yeah yeah. I need a huge blinking flashing disclaimer at the top of all my critique lists. THIS IS A BUNCH OF **** I PULLED OUT OF MY ASS WHILE LOOKING AT IT. I HAVEN'T TRIED TO IMPLEMENT MOST OF THIS I JUST THINK THIS WOULD WORK BETTER OR IS WORTH TRYING.

ty

i just didn't want anyone to get daunted thinking these were stipulations for their files' acceptance

[omgitznpv]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

should i quit sm again

i kinda..have no motivation...

[Wyde]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

So, I actually have something that I could send to this. It's very rare that I go make a keyboard file though, and I'm far from skilled in term of playing keyboard files in general, so I do have reservations about it...but trying to see if I could put my experiment together has kept me up almost all night. XD Will probably send in the morning when I've rested and reworked it a little more.

P.S.: btw, the song I'm attempting is Guitar Hero by Dougal and Gammer. Blargh.

[Bluearrowll]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

should i quit sm again

i kinda..have no motivation...

No you should make more Parajazz and Nageki -triste- files to piss off people who can't play rainbow

[omgitznpv]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

parajazz stinks and nageki isn't that good either lol

i played through nageki again and wow im bad at syncing :l

[Patashu]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

your nageki was much much better than the time I tried to step it lol

[i love gabba]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

When are the rest of the notes going to be posted?

[Patashu]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

@i love gabba: I already posted my notes on the file you collabed on with scylaxx. no one else is making detailed notes so just read mine I guess

Re: (Coolboyrulez) Hell Prominence

Post by Patashu on Mon Jul 06, 2009 9:05 pm
for what it is it's well done, but it's quite boring due to lack of interesting layering or interesting patterns. also all the 32nds are the exact same pattern omggg. could possibly benefit from creative freeze usage too

there were some interesting missed layers during both time long freezes were employed (also I found that 421421421 1 2 1 2 1 pattern very annoying I always got a boo or good on it <.<) for instance. not enough to save it but it could be a bit more interesting

basically what kil said

[omgitznpv]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

your nageki was much much better than the time I tried to step it lol

idk there are some really dumb parts

and iamme helped me with the first half so :l

[Patashu]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

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[i love gabba]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

@i love gabba: I already posted my notes on the file you collabed on with scylaxx. no one else is making detailed notes so just read mine I guess

Oh ok, thanks! Cuz I also want to fix One Phrase Blues

[Patashu]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

oops forgot about one phrase blues.
-fix the part with the 32nd gallops. they're almost certainly mistimed since sometimes you start them on orange notes, sometimes they end on orange notes and percussion instruments sometimes go on orange notes and sometimes don't. check that the note interval is right too
-see if adding in any more layers helps it. you missed a few crashes in the song and it could possibly do with layering the snare at some points. experiment with it
-tighten colour note sync overall
-second half of m27 to first half of m29, this part is 24th swung so it should go like x..x..x.xx..x..x..xxxx.xx..x..x.xx..x..x..xxxx.xx. actually I just noticed the song is very swung in general so any time you have 16ths make sure it's not actually 64th swing or 24th swing
-similarly, the part beginning m29 is swung and the 32nd rolls are actually 24ths. should also step the kssht instrument here imho
-do stuff like that.

also, here's Mrbob's Icicles

Re: (Mrbob) Icicles

Pos tby Patashu on Mon Jul 06, 2009 9:20 pm
good song choice, nice and jazzy. I wouldn't be surprised if this could make it in. lemme go into the editor and snoop around

measure by measure breakdown: (these are all tentatives suggestions obv)
m1/m2: single note for the first beat of these two measures? your call
m2: yellow note just before beat 2 could be a jump (bass + hiss)
m6: first beat single note, for same reason as m2
m10: first note should be a jump. also in this 'chorus' part you could think about making snare count as two notes like you have in the intro. anyway the chorus comes a lot so make sure changes are applied globally
m16: if you're going to make snare a jump, yellow note after beat 2 needs to be a jump. also the last two blue notes could be given a minifreeze (to the hiss)
m18: I heard some extra 16ths at the beginning of this measure. beat 4 needs to be a jump
m19: has extra 16ths in similar fashion to m18. following earlier layering scheme, the last 8th jump should be a single note but beat 4 should be a jump
m20: should start with a jump. (if you follow the minifreeze suggestion in m16 do the same here)
m28: that gap in the stream should be a minijack with the note after it and also a jump (piano). also minifreezes to hiss again?
m29: last blue jump is wrong, but the first beat of m30 could be a jump. also just so you know, there's a yellow note just after beat 3 in every measure here
m30: the piano/guitar thing in the end sounds like it should be 48th gallops or something <.< idk I can't make it out
m32: why is the snare not a jump this time?
m33: second yellow note could be a jump, yellow note after beat 3 but NOT offbeat between beats 3 and 4 this time (it's just not there!)
m35: the 32nd triplet actually goes from the yellow note to the blue note, not the blue to the yellow after it
m36: if it's convenient, the two snare drums on beats 2 and 2.5 are each followed by a yellow bass hit. could do like 13 4 13 4. beat 4 should be a minijack with the yellow note after it
m37: imho take out one note of the blue and put in a yellow jump just before it (crash + drum)
m39: beat 3.5 should be followed by a 16th, on D say
m45: should start with a single note also imho yellow jump to the pianos when it comes up?
m46: should start with a jump.
m47: should start with a single note. the piano/guitar is playing 12ths here not 16ths
m48: start with a jump
m49: start with a single note. also, what's up with the layering in the second half of this measure?
m60: beat 3.5 should be a jump

[Kil14]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

technicality wise there's no problem with it, I found the patterns really annoying is all

also updated first post

[who_cares973]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

saskrotch ?_?

[Wyde]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

So, I sent my file. o_o

plz juj soon. =(