Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

[who_cares973]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

woah notes

[gnr61]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

also find a better fucen mp3 for that song -.-

[moches]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

is that from the secret DCP forums...

[Kil14]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

small update

[Patashu]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

re: Quake (moches)

after a second play it grew on me

the 24th part was a bit boring but idk. can you acknowledge the piano somehow in it?

(I'd like to see lots of minifreezes for emphasis of powerful lone hits I think)
measure by measure breakdown:
end of m3: should be 24ths for four notes not a gallop. maybe make the hand minifreezes?
end of m6: the 24th gallop is right in this one, buut beat 4 should be a jump
end of m9: add in a 16th note. and maybe one just after m10 begins
m12: layer the organ. beat 4 should be a jump
m13: starts with a 24th triplet not 16ths
m13 on: there are parts where you don't break the guitar when it stops playing (typically whenever it has a 'waah' ending on a yellow note). also imho those 'waahs' should count as two notes. also the 48th gallop things w/ cyan notes are actually four 32nds that go like this: orange red orange yellow; mid up mid down. this applies to all of them. any other 48ths are 32nds
m14: yellow freeze needs to end earlier, step minijack of guitar
m15: start should go x.xxx.x on 32nds
m16: 32nds at the end are five notes long not three
m18: pretty sure the five note 32nd thing is just the last three 32nds, first one is erroneous
m19: starts with 24ths
m22: set of 32nds leading into beat 4 were missed
m25 on: layer in the melody when it plays during one of the jacks?
m35 on: it's strange that a strong open hi hat here is always on its own even though it's coupled with the guitar (or later piano) frequently. should be jumps
m36: the first yellow jump is wrong
m37 on: snare that's uncoupled from the piano should be a single note here, imho.
m39/m40 has erroneous jumps. can u spot them all??
m40: pretty sure those are 32nds not a 48th thing? also jumps on those two yellow notes where that drum plays?
m41-m44 could possibly use tidying up, idk. is it consistent in any case? that's the important part. because thinking about it you probably could use jumps to emphasize intersections between guitar and piano or parts of the piano as long as it's consistent and meaningful to do so

and yeah

[who_cares973]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

hope i dont have to fix that much on my files

[Patashu]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

it only sounds like a lot cuz I'm listing every single one-off technical error I find

[who_cares973]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

oooo

[Patashu]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

in addition to other things that you'll actually have to meditate on

[operationstrawbarry]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

Reserving Omar Santana's - You Shall Die for this.

And probably Chase and Status Feat Kano - Against all Odds which Im currently stepping. But I dont think Ill step it here in nanking. Leaving early from nanking back to Taiwan this saturday and will begin stepping You Shall Die. Expect an epic sounding Old Skool Gabba song.

Edit: HAHA oh my god... China censorship ftw... Nan Jing Turns into Nan King. Im so glad Im going back in 5 more days.

[moches]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

I'm dondon

Oh sweet holy wow

Also two for three Yay.

[Patashu]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

yeah quake has a cool feel so fix all those technical errors and stuff. and don't accidentally make it worse in the process or anything

[gnr61]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

but don't fix any of them if you think it feels worse!

[Patashu]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

yeah yeah. I need a huge blinking flashing disclaimer at the top of all my critique lists. THIS IS A BUNCH OF **** I PULLED OUT OF MY ASS WHILE LOOKING AT IT. I HAVEN'T TRIED TO IMPLEMENT MOST OF THIS I JUST THINK THIS WOULD WORK BETTER OR IS WORTH TRYING.

[Coolboyrulez0]

Re: Kil's Dark Chancellors Pack 2 (Submissions Open)

Sent a file. Hope you guys like it ;D