my old poem death
Posted on: July 21, 2008, at 06:38:01pm

death is the balance with the world
with life and death
without death the world will implode

the evil angels walks through
the nights while they find
souls to take over for
their own good and will

we all walk through the
nights as we look at each other
we walk with swords and daggers
getting redy to kill
the evil angels of death

the evil angels walk throug
the nights while they find
souls to take over for
their own good and life

they find us in ths
world with no hope
no love they'll come and
kill us but will one help us? no we'll go to our deaths

the evil angels of death
comes and trys to kill us
but the three of us will
defeat the evil angels

no we lost and we lost our lives
there wasn't any thing good about us
we just wanted to
die.........
bleed...................
and to be with them in thay place

we all are not worth killing just live your
pitfull thing you call life

1. 1: priestman1
   Posted at 8:56am on July 22nd, 2008

   I like it i looked at all your stuff and think its very good xD
2. 2: shadowrougesonic
   Posted at 9:01am on July 22nd, 2008

   oh thank you very much ^^ this is really old when i was in 6th grade!
3. 3: kidko247
   Posted at 7:57pm on August 8th, 2008

   cool no its more then cool its awesome
4. 4: shadowrougesonic
   Posted at 10:01pm on August 8th, 2008

   oh really? thank you ^^
5. 5: punisher1000
   Posted at 7:44am on August 18th, 2008

   ITS ABSOLUTLEY BEAUTIFULL JUST LIKE U
6. 6: punisher1000
   Posted at 7:45am on August 18th, 2008

   IN MY EYES EVERYTHING U DO IS A MASTER PIECE
7. 7: shadowrougesonic
   Posted at 8:28am on August 18th, 2008

   oh thank you ^^