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The second page to my story i am writing Posted on: July 20, 2008, at 11:02:10pm “What would the question be, Mrs. Dawn?” I asked, looking at her. “If China split its population with the world, then kept having children every day, how much of the population would still be in China?” “Well how many people are in China?” “1.3 billion people live in China.” “I’m very sorry, but that wouldn’t make any sense. If they are having children every day and they are splitting the population with the world how are they doing that and making the children?” It was silent in the class. Mrs. Dawn looked at me like I was a murderer. She went to her desk and started writing a note and looked at me. Then continued writing. Everyone looked at me. Whispers and giggles filled the room. “Hey Jack.” A student whispered. “What can I help you with?” “Why do all your teachers not like you?” “Because I don’t dress and talk like you.” “Jack. Go to the deans’ office.” “Ok,” I grabbed my note and walked out of class. I smirked. “I’m not going to the stupid deans’ office.” I started walking home and reading my book. I could read without hurting myself because of how well my hearing is. I walked and read until I had to stop. Something was in my surrounding and it wasn’t like Winter. It was like another vampire. I put my book away and closed my eyes. Then opened then back open to look around. I stopped my searching at a tree. “Who are you and what are you doing here?” I asked looking at the tree The tree shook and then a boy fell out of the tree. He looked like me. Black hair, caramel colored skin, and green eyes. He smiled and bows. “HI THERE!” He greeted looking at me. “Um……hi…..who are you?” I asked looking at the teenager. “I am your new neighbor Riku. What’s your name?” “My name is Jack and it’s nice to meet you” I answered smiling and holding my hand out. Riku shook my hand and smiled. I saw his fangs and smiled. I wasn’t going to be the only vampire in this town. I am going to feel like I belong! “Hey Riku are you a vampire?” I asked looking at him with curious eyes. “Yes I am,” he looked at me, “are you one?” “Yes I am. Well maybe I will see you at school?” “In a week I am still moving in,” he answered laughing “I hope we get a class together. Later!” “Alright. Bye!” I started walking in my house to find my parents writing and playing music. My mom flew up from her seat and smiled “Hello honey why are you home so early from school?” “Teachers sent me to the dean for a stupid reason so instead I came home.” I answered sitting my backpack down. “What was this stupid reason Jack?” My father asked looking at me with red eyes. |
Posted at 11:31pm on July 20th, 2008
Haha! Great development! I love Jack's wittiness.
Posted at 11:32pm on July 20th, 2008
lol thank you it was already written with the first page but i didn't want to put it up just yet it need to edit. Jack is awesome! My jack mwuauauaha