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a poem
Posted on: April 6, 2008, at 10:50:22pm

i have a poem it may seem different but here you go

i love you
such strong words you should really only say once
unless you are lying to that person
you don't really love them
to you they are just toys

When you say 'I love you'
those 3 words stay glued in the persons head for a life time
NEVER say that if you don't mean it

The only time you say i love you
is when you are either dying or you acullay mean it
don't lie to the person you only make your life worst

I love you
such strong words
can do so much damage to
both of the lovers life
never say it if you don't mean it

  1. That happened to me once. Heartbroken for a few days...

  2. yeah i was pissed when i wrote this but i am good

  3. That's good then. I like how your poems convey their messages without all those lyrical rhymes.

  4. yeah i can't rhyme if i do then it comes out horrible so i just write ^^

  5. lol, it's still well written

  6. heh thanks! i can think of a poem in like 1 minute and it is really awesome because it sounds better when it is first thought out

  7. Oh so you sorta just made this poem on the spot?

  8. yeah i was interesting

  9. awesome poem

  10. oh thank you ^^

  11. im with you all the way on that 1oo percent

  12. yeah i was in a bad mood when i wrote this but now i love this poem because it shows you how you should think about your feelings

  13. happened to me the guy just wanted a girl at his side.....more like multiple girls at his side.....