welcome back ffr :D

ok the topic, is a girl finding out her b/f cheated on her, and she kills him, his family, and then herself, tell me what you think of it.. so far


im done with your shit
just pack up and go
you promised me never
just shut up and go

ill have my revenge
you can count on that
you hurt me so much
now get that fact

i hope you understand
what i had to do
it was the only way
i could get over you

Now i sit above your grave
with tears in my eyes
i scream out "thank you"
up towards the sky

now i sit alone
thinking of what ive done
tears fall from my face
as i reach for the gun
i ask myself why
you had to go and do that
had to go for that bitch
your family cheered you on
but now they are gone
they lay beside you
in the cold ground
im finnally over
ill see you around

ok this is a sort of long and hard to tell story, but it all started when i was a kid, constant family problems, fighting and everything, and my name always seemed to come up the most, so i kept the blame of my mom and dad fighting as my fault.. they ended up parting and getting back together, but the fighting never stopped, and yet again my name came up the most, so i took it all upon my self, well i remember my first real relationship 7th grade.. i went out with this girl for 3 months and she broke my heart the day before valentines day i was crushed, she never told me why, so my natural instinct from my past was to take the blame upon myself, i was then single for 2 years sulking in heart break, until in 9th grade i finally had the courage to ask out another girl, which only led to a break up then that led to a series of heart breaks and endless pain and sorrow, so much that i have become

A Shadow of My Former Self
A Shadow of What I Once Was
I have Become A Shadow
A Shade Of Me

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