Haiku - Page 2

GWC_heyitsmee · 08-1-2008, 03:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by -Yukari-

Heyitsmee you didn't use the 5-7-5 format, customstuff neither did you and you spelled haiku wrong.

dammit useless i

i phail

**customstuff** · 08-1-2008, 03:23 PM

Actually I did, even on the last one XD

-Yukari- · 08-1-2008, 03:31 PM

You didn't have all that there when I posted. And:

1. to
2. write
3. a
4. hai
5. ku
6. poem

TakeHayashi_XD · 08-1-2008, 04:37 PM

ain't it just fun to post some nice haikus

FictionJunction · 08-1-2008, 04:44 PM

TakeHayashi_XD · 08-1-2008, 05:03 PM

Xx{Midday}xX · 08-1-2008, 05:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by FictionJunction

no

QFE

edubardus can lock this no? =)

who_cares973 · 08-1-2008, 05:57 PM

i like me some haikus

Tranquility:

it starts where life ends
What you seek you find within
close your eyes and see

The Countdown:

seven...six...five..four
counting down till your last breath
three...two.....then silence

Crashfan3 · 08-1-2008, 06:00 PM

Wow, those were nice, who_cares973 :O

I'll try again...

Trapped inside the ice
My heart weeps but there's no sound
Have you forgotten?

Days and weeks go by
Lying on this bed, I think
"Life sure is a thrill..."

Meh. At least those two were a little less D&D-esque.

who_cares973 · 08-1-2008, 06:40 PM

ffr related one

Music takes control
Life passing by as i sit
damn you FFR

NFD · 08-1-2008, 06:47 PM

Here's the best:

Chuck Norris is best
His round-house kick is lethal
Do not piss him off

**customstuff** · 08-1-2008, 06:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by -Yukari-

You didn't have all that there when I posted. And:

1. to
2. write
3. a
4. hai
5. ku
6. poem

sorry, but poem is 2 syllables.
1.po
2.em

who_cares973 · 08-1-2008, 06:56 PM

maybe yukari pronounces poem as pom

omgitznpv · 08-1-2008, 07:25 PM

poem is pronounced poh-um anyways, though i still say it like pome~

**Mans0n** · 08-1-2008, 08:50 PM

Am i gay?
no dont think so
owait...

who_cares973 · 08-1-2008, 09:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mans0n

Am i gay?
no dont think so
owait...

horrible attempt at a haiku O.o

**Mans0n** · 08-1-2008, 09:38 PM

yeah im pretty gay..

NatsumiTheLucario · 08-2-2008, 12:50 AM

I don't really like haikus
but I don't know what it is
maybe I'm just dumb

Crashfan3 · 08-2-2008, 12:55 AM

Seriously, people, don't post if you can't do the 5/7/5 thing.

Again, since I'm posting...

Would you like some sake?
Let's go out and draw our swords
We shall fight like men

lol

who_cares973 · 08-2-2008, 01:53 AM

and haikus dont need to be in 5/7/5 aslong as it stays in the same format like you can do

6/8/6 or 10/12/10
or 4/6/4

08-1-2008, 04:37 PM	#24
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08-1-2008, 05:03 PM	#26
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08-1-2008, 05:57 PM	#28
who_cares973 FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: :U Age: 35 Posts: 15,407	Re: Haiku i like me some haikus Tranquility: it starts where life ends What you seek you find within close your eyes and see The Countdown: seven...six...five..four counting down till your last breath three...two.....then silence __________________

08-1-2008, 06:00 PM	#29
Crashfan3 FFR Player Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Jefferson, Ore. Age: 32 Posts: 2,937	Re: Haiku Wow, those were nice, who_cares973 :O I'll try again... Trapped inside the ice My heart weeps but there's no sound Have you forgotten? Days and weeks go by Lying on this bed, I think "Life sure is a thrill..." Meh. At least those two were a little less D&D-esque. __________________ Twilight Sparkle's Ponyville Group Free Chiptune Streaming Radio! Thanks justin_ator and megamon88 for making my sig 20% cooler.

08-1-2008, 06:40 PM	#30
who_cares973 FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: :U Age: 35 Posts: 15,407	Re: Haiku ffr related one Music takes control Life passing by as i sit damn you FFR __________________

08-1-2008, 06:47 PM	#31
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08-1-2008, 06:56 PM	#33
who_cares973 FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: :U Age: 35 Posts: 15,407	Re: Haiku maybe yukari pronounces poem as pom __________________

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08-1-2008, 09:38 PM	#37
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08-2-2008, 12:50 AM	#38
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08-2-2008, 12:55 AM	#39
Crashfan3 FFR Player Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Jefferson, Ore. Age: 32 Posts: 2,937	Re: Haiku Seriously, people, don't post if you can't do the 5/7/5 thing. Again, since I'm posting... Would you like some sake? Let's go out and draw our swords We shall fight like men lol __________________ Twilight Sparkle's Ponyville Group Free Chiptune Streaming Radio! Thanks justin_ator and megamon88 for making my sig 20% cooler.

08-2-2008, 01:53 AM	#40
who_cares973 FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: :U Age: 35 Posts: 15,407	Re: Haiku and haikus dont need to be in 5/7/5 aslong as it stays in the same format like you can do 6/8/6 or 10/12/10 or 4/6/4 __________________

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