need critics <C.C.>

[Mahjix]

I have attached an image with some notes on things I felt were off. In addition to the notes about the face, the mouth is in the wrong place. The space between your nose and mouth is not greater than the space between your mouth and your chin. I think if you move her mouth up to fix that she would look a lot prettier. The shading is good but it is inconsistent in some areas such as her arms, in particular. Looking at her legs and face, she has little to no shading on her arms whatsoever.

Her right arm looks really weird for some odd reason and it may just be the position it's in but I think if her arm was more "in" like her left arm then it would look more graceful giving her a more linear look. Oh, her arms also appear to be very long.