my views on how the american goverment traps lower class citizens.

[Coodles]

so if im all full of **** and my writing sucks so bad, why are people still argueing over this topic?

and if its so uninteresting and poorly written then why do you people bother to reply and fuss over this?

i admit this isnt a huge topic yet i have gotten a good amount of responses.

and yes my grammar,flow, and over all presentation of my work could be more organized and ore carefully constructed, but yet understand i didnt mean for this to become a critical thinking topic.

i wrote this for a random thoughts bulletin on my page. so there infact i didnt care how it looked, and when i thought hmm maybe some people might share some of my views i decided to post it to where i MIGHT get some useful critisism.

so yes attack my spelling, punctuation, and views but remember this people.

**** you guys took the time to reply.

i just wrote the damn thing.

i think people are always looking for ways to be dominate.

always looking for a way to attack someone for the smallest of errors.

i also think doing so may make that person feel they have acheived something, yet all they did was provide no useful hints or tips.

i mean come on people i woulda took a simple you need to organize your views.

or practice on how you layout your essays.

i admit some people shared slight common ground with me yet never dead on.

but coming into this i didnt ask for useful tips i just put the paper out there and says read it people.

so i cant expect too much.

and i also noticed another thing that i think compliments my attacking theory is that, people who bitched and whined about how bad of a job i did.

they decided to REVISIT the topic to see if i had made any new posts or what ever their reason being.

i would think that they came back to see if there was any other way to attack anything new i might have posted.