"Angel" My first love poem

[mead1]

Re: "Angel" My first love poem

Nah, I actually wrote that other poem for an English assignment last year and was posting it as a mockery, since it contains a similarly repeated term of endearment.

[Midnighter]

Re: "Angel" My first love poem

Nah, I actually wrote that other poem for an English assignment last year and was posting it as a mockery, since it contains a similarly repeated term of endearment.

Now you're mocking me. Wow.

[mead1]

Re: "Angel" My first love poem

My initial post was very mean, so I'm going to simply say that you used an emoticon in your poem. If it wasn't already boring and cliche, that alone would have made it unfit for viewing by anyone the poem wasn't written for.

I've been mocking you since about here.

[Svaz]

Re: "Angel" My first love poem

Whoa whoa whoa, where did the emoticon go? that was the best part!

[Midnighter]

Re: "Angel" My first love poem

This is getting dull

[Midnighter]

Re: "Angel" My first love poem

thanks for the feedback everyone. I'm gonna be posting some new stuff. they will be poems written before i got feedback on this one so they may be the same, a bit.