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  • mead1
    Cerebellumberjack
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Aug 2003
    • 3960

    #16
    Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

    Originally posted by kitkat9
    If you have comments that could improve the poem then please make them.
    you could delete it

    or write something that isn't stupidly cliche

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    • GamerShadow
      FFR Player
      • Oct 2005
      • 2534

      #17
      Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

      Half of this poem is from that Scary Kids Scaring Kids song. Learn to plagiarize.


      You are caught now, like a deer in headlights
      You're stuck, you've been bound by your own fears.

      You must break free or you will forever be condemned.

      You can't say that a life isn't worth dying for,
      And what if you gave it all and received nothing.
      Would it really matter?

      You've been waiting for this one day all your life,
      it is nothing short of predictable that it is now presented.
      But it is now that you must stop holding your head down,
      You shant Give it up!
      Get a hold of yourself now!

      Or you might as well forget it all.

      Can't you see, with each blow they become more powerless?
      You must Dig deep within and find the courage to speak.
      Are you really still bound by the fear?

      Can't you speak or are you just doomed here?

      You're there again, a deer in headlights.
      You've given up.
      To save your own life.
      Last edited by GamerShadow; 04-12-2009, 11:11 AM.
      Note to self Finish.

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      • 1mpuls3
        Impulsive By Nature
        • Jul 2007
        • 340

        #18
        Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

        Hahahahahaha owned




        Originally posted by GamerShadow
        Half of this poem is from that Scary Kids Scaring Kids song. Learn to plagiarize.


        You are caught now, like a deer in headlights
        You're stuck, you've been bound by your own fears.

        You must break free or you will forever be condemned.

        You can't say that a life isn't worth dying for,
        And what if you gave it all and received nothing.
        Would it really matter?

        You've been waiting for this one day all your life,
        it is nothing short of predictable that it is now presented.
        But it is now that you must stop holding your head down,
        You shant Give it up!
        Get a hold of yourself now!

        Or you might as well forget it all.

        Can't you see, with each blow they become more powerless?
        You must Dig deep within and find the courage to speak.
        Are you really still bound by the fear?

        Can't you speak or are you just doomed here?

        You're there again, a deer in headlights.
        You've given up.
        To save your own life.


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        • NFD
          FFR Player
          • Nov 2007
          • 4715

          #19
          Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

          What a lying bitch.

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          • dorama
            Banned
            • Mar 2008
            • 87

            #20
            Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

            oh my god gamershadow lmfao

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            • ShAiOnEi
              FFR Player
              • May 2007
              • 1110

              #21
              Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

              Die stupid bitch Die.
              I love my son Auron

              Epic thread killer

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              • Svaz
                quite clever
                • Oct 2008
                • 792

                #22
                Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

                For reference, the lyrics to Degenerates, by Scary Kids Scaring Kids:

                Do you think you're made of gold?
                Invincible?
                You think you can handle it?
                You will learn from this.

                I'm telling you friend
                this is something worth fighting for.
                Does it not seem contradicting
                to sit back and watch them take more?
                Caught like a deer in their headlights, you're stuck now.
                You're bound by your fears
                I suggest you break free or
                you'll forever be damned here.

                We are merely degenerates waiting for you.

                They keep marching on
                spilling blood like savages.
                Taking lives while your cigarette burns, burns.

                You can't tell me my friend
                that that wasn't worth dying for.
                gave it all and received nothing
                may as well have let them take more.
                Dig deep find the courage to speak
                are you really still bound by your fear?
                This is all just a dream now
                you can't speak and you're damned here.

                We are merely degenerates waiting for you.

                They keep marching on
                spilling blood like savages.
                Taking lives while your cigarette burns, burns.

                This is our fight for freedom
                this is our way of saying
                this is our day.

                We've been waiting for this one day all our lives
                This nothing short of predictable.
                Stop holding your head down
                Give it up!
                get a hold of yourself now.
                Or give it up!
                Your like a deer in the headlights,
                You've given up!
                To save your life.

                We've been waiting, yeah waiting all our lives
                This nothing short of predictable.
                Stop holding your head down
                Give it up!
                get a hold of yourself now.
                Or give it up!
                Your like a deer in the headlights,
                You've given up!
                To save your life.
                Find the will to save your life!

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                • Tokzic
                  FFR Player
                  • May 2005
                  • 6878

                  #23
                  Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

                  I've never even heard that song and I called it.

                  Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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                  • mead1
                    Cerebellumberjack
                    FFR Simfile Author
                    • Aug 2003
                    • 3960

                    #24
                    Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

                    Is this the part where she disappears and never returns, the part where she FUCKING DELETES EVERYTHING, or the part where she continues to deny it?

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                    • 1mpuls3
                      Impulsive By Nature
                      • Jul 2007
                      • 340

                      #25
                      Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

                      Hopefully the first one but that is most unlikely.

                      Originally posted by mead1
                      Is this the part where she disappears and never returns, the part where she FUCKING DELETES EVERYTHING, or the part where she continues to deny it?


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                      • Svaz
                        quite clever
                        • Oct 2008
                        • 792

                        #26
                        Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

                        She might make a SUPER TALENTED alt account

                        lol jk

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                        • dore
                          caveman pornstar
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          FFR Music Producer
                          • Feb 2006
                          • 6317

                          #27
                          Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

                          why not plagiarize something good?
                          http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IREnpHco9mw

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                          • Tokzic
                            FFR Player
                            • May 2005
                            • 6878

                            #28
                            Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

                            hey kitkat i just thought of what to call your poem

                            why don't you call it "degenerates by scary kids scaring kids"

                            Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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                            • 1mpuls3
                              Impulsive By Nature
                              • Jul 2007
                              • 340

                              #29
                              Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

                              You should do what that fat woman did and jump into a polar bear pit. I mean sounds fun right.


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                              • kitkat9
                                FFR Player
                                • Feb 2009
                                • 87

                                #30
                                Re: A poem that I had no idea what to title

                                Ok, I'm gettingsick of you people leaving comments on my profile. Look, I'm sorry. That is the first time I've ever done that, I just thougt it was neat, and a good mix of words. It's the first and last time I will do that.
                                Now please stop pestering me!

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