XOON 4 submissions open

[Gundam-Dude]

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(Cedolad) Cybertron
- Measure 17 can be a hand placement.
- Measure 26, the 8th minijack can be jumpjacks.
- Measure 33, the 4 jumps can actually be layered as hands. It accents the song better since that part becomes more dominant than the song itself.
- Measure 34, first 8th jump can be a hand placement.
- Measure 42, the two 8th jumps can be hand placements.
- Measure 49 can be a hand placement.
- Measure 57 can be a hand placement.
- Measure 73 can be a hand placement.
- Measure 80 can be a hand placement. Also in the same measure the second 8th jump can be a hand placement.
- Measure 81 can be a hand placement.
- Measure 88, the three 8th jumps can be hand placements.

Remember that this is only my opinion as a judge and arguably you won't necessarily have to do exactly as I point out. Before you make any changes to your file, you might want to wait for Moches or someone else to review your file and see if they'll accept your file as it is. If they'll accept it, you won't need to apply changes and you can pretty much disregard my review and suggestions.

[cedolad]

Re: XOON 4 submissions open

GD where'd you hear those hands anyway?

[EnR]

Re: XOON 4 submissions open

if ya gonna step metal stay away from warmen and cob since they're both the same fucen keyboardist.


step lte dream theatre sue or stuff like that

I can step ministry of lost souls, crazy 7:00+ part

[who_cares973]

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damn mine is short

[cedolad]

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Edit: never mind, read all of it lol, I'll find out where you heard those hands and throw some in.

[Gundam-Dude]

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(Legacy) Crossbone Battle Theme
Why does the Heavy chart have more notes than the Oni? There's inconsistencies with some jump and hand usage and overall there was absolutely no replay value in this file let alone anything notable that would warrant an accept from me. Rejected.

(Legacy) Crystal Wind -Hisui Mix-
Hard to distinguish your layering during the jumpstream parts. You had a lot of unnecessary mini-freezes which was pretty much just spammed. You may want to check the sync on some parts of the file because a lot of sections felt off sync. Rejected.

(Cedolad) Cybertron
I see that you don't like using hands. There were several opportunities for hand placements throughout the file that you avoided and left out which makes the file seem empty. Jacks for the most part seem accurate and as Kommisar said, it's just another typical DnB file. Accepting on the condition that a fix is sent in with hand placements, otherwise Rejected.

(Legacy) Feelings From The Air
Piano parts in the beginning weren't entirely accurate. You were missing notes for the most part and it seems that you're reluctant to use rainbow notes when needed. Edit is pretty dumpy. Personally, I found no real fun factor let alone replay value in this so I'm going to have to say Rejected.

(EnR) Heretics & Killers V2
Well layered and nice application of jacks. Pack already has way too much metal but I'll lightly Accept this since we could use some more variety in terms of stepping styles.

(Who_Cares973) Shuriken Cut
Very cool file. Accepted.

[Legacyzero]

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So just sent in Feelings From the Air v2. It doesn't seem to be in any of the packs anymore so I thought that I might as well send it.

[baq12]

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Prolly better than my version. Mine's old =/.

ur version just had some parts that irked me really bad (those 48ths dude was the majority), Torrents version just irked me even more cuz of some of the parts he stepped that werent PR, which is y i decided to restep it (and the fact that i was bored)

[who_cares973]

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step protest the hero

[kommisar[os]]

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if ya gonna step metal stay away from warmen and cob since they're both the same fucen keyboardist.


step lte dream theatre sue or stuff like that

[who_cares973]

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sent in shuriken cut

[Joe D]

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If it's one chart it shouldn't say vs cuz that'd imply there were 2.

Then wat should it say?Prolly somthing like "Joe D the coolest and Baq12,not as cool as Joe D but hes still cool".

PS-Id try to also send another file in.Something that is not Warmen (seriously Warmens Getting old on Xoon).Something that is not metal (wich is hard cuz I cant make Good Chart 4 something that isnt metal.) Infact,Someone send me a metal file that can make a nice chart 4 this pak.Somethin like All that Remains or As I lay Dying or better yet,Children of Bodom.Any one care to give me Ideas?

[who_cares973]

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i finished shuriken cut woop

[N.T.M.]

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MKommi.Could u do the Joe D vs Baq cd title.I just realized that I suk at making Collab CD titles lolz

If it's one chart it shouldn't say vs cuz that'd imply there were 2.

hey who stepped a short file. thats my thing

Me! In fact it was supposed to compete with your guitar file specifically. ^_^

(Baq12) Sound of Truth
Another typical Baq file. Rainbow guitar solos as per usual. Accepted.

Prolly better than my version. Mine's old =/.

im leaving it open for a while longer since a buncha dudes said they were gonna send files aka roar midare whocarez etc.


probably gonna be the biggest xoon pack so far lmao

I'm still in San Diego!! Gimme a few more days to get back and finish.

[cedolad]

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I like the idea of a 3 way collab. But we should take this idea else where and not in the Xoon 4 thread lol