The Last page of the first chapter :D :D
Posted on: September 1, 2008, at 04:46:05pm

trust me enough to know about my brother! I couldn’t take it. I opened my window and jumped out.
I wasn’t going to run away. That would have been stupid. I was just going to take a walk merely. This walk wasn’t going to be like any other. No. This walk was going to be my food. I was going to kill someone tonight. I wasn’t going to always be that little ‘demonic angel’ my mother raised and loved. No I was going to be the bad boy for tonight. I was going to be…… the killer of my sorrows.

1. 1: carlin
   Posted at 9:07pm on September 1st, 2008

   I guess this part didn't fit on the last page? Anyway, part 6 is probably your best page for spelling issues! =D Nothing too much to say about this one. I love how you put great twists into things. But I don't really get 'killer of my sorrows'. Can't wait for the next page!
2. 2: shadowrougesonic
   Posted at 9:08pm on September 1st, 2008

   lol yeah i am going to change that up :) and i already have everything for the last page :) so i may upload it tomorrow :)
3. 3: shadowrougesonic
   Posted at 9:09pm on September 1st, 2008

   oh yeah and the killer of my sorrows basically means he is going to kill for when he is sad or depressed