Attention!
Posted on: August 23, 2008, at 09:21:10am

Among me are two soldiers
Two soldier taking lead,
For they have faced powerful blows
but still are fighting to succeed.
Their helmet are harder than rock,
And their breastplates are made of gold.
They're the mightiest men I know,
Who under pressure did not fold.
Their pain is unimaginable.
But their strength is without limit.
No weakness did they show, Not even in their darkest
minute.
I respect these soldiers deeply
and their efforts I salute
For these are genuine fighters
For which there is no substitute.

-DDF

Please leave comments about this poem and many more to come.

1. 1: Soulja Klown
   Posted at 9:37pm on August 23rd, 2008

   OMG!!!!! OFF THE CHAIN!!!!! youre way better than me!
2. 2: JikininkiFace
   Posted at 10:22pm on August 23rd, 2008

   Omg Danielle, get this published, these poems are off the hook^^
   This poem is about me and Quint^^
3. 3: Harp of Altara
   Posted at 8:26pm on September 6th, 2008

   I like it - the theme is very nicely detailed. There are a few minor grammatical issues that need some smoothing over, but nothing that ruins the fluidity of the poem. Nice work!