IKAROS :: FFR Batch Submission

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jh05013 - IKAROS - ETIA. feat. Jenga [7.75 / 10]

Autumn 2024 Seasonal Batch

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Accepted

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1goVL1D37TyZKlYBfER-ZIZlssHdWdq9-gLSdX6A2sII/edit?gid=0#gid=0

Note: this is much harder than my previous submission for the same song.

Simfile Folder Name

IKAROS (jh05013)

Note Count

1386

Chart Length

2:08

Average NPS

11.1804

Estimated Difficulty

73.18

First Note

0:04

Ending Note Delay

0:04

Hand Bias

x -6

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 2 3 - 0 4 - 1

Jumps

								x 278
							

Hands

								x 96
							

Quads

x 4

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 3

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
20 - 20.00 nps 2 Seconds
37 - 18.50 nps 5 Seconds
78 - 15.60 nps 10 Seconds
151 - 15.10 nps 30 Seconds
397 - 13.23 nps 1 Minute
740 - 12.33 nps

Color Count

x 608 (43.87%)

x 509 (36.72%)

x 14 (1.01%)

x 223 (16.09%)

x 14 (1.01%)

x 5 (0.36%)

x 0 (0%)

x 13 (0.94%)

Largest Note Gaps

3.43s1.03s0.87s0.7s0.53s0.5s0.5s0.4s

transition fixes

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Hand Bias changed: -9 => -11

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IKAROS (jh05013) [7.5/10, CQ/FR*]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

*23.370-28.513 - Are the jumps going to the Vocals, or the Piano? Either way, you're missing some jumps here
44.113 - Ghost note. Not Synth, not Vocals
1:01.684 - Why jump? Not Vocals. If this becomes single, then maybe 1:01.770 can be hand for CymbalCrash
1:10.513/1:11.884 - Why jump? No Vocals to additively layer this
1:21.827 - Missing jump. Vocals
1:25.598 - Maybe hand?
*1:48.741 - What is being stepped in this section?

>>Mostly straightforward & consistent. See asterisks

Judge Score: 7.50 - Fixes Required

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IKAROS

- Offset's good.

23.884 - Single? I don't think this vocal is sustained like this, since you only use jumps to syllables.
38.884 - Missing note.
**1:48.741 - I'm not sure why this section is noticeably empty - what is being followed here? It doesn't seem like you try to layer the synth additively, nor the vocals for that matter.
2:02.113 - Missing note.

There's a bit of additive layering going on in this file that I'm not entirely sure of, but it doesn't take away the enjoyment I have with this file. Pretty simple and fun, though that section near the end is a headscratcher as you've completely lost me on what are you trying to do there. FR on the **'d note. [8*/10, Fixes Required]

Judge Score: 8.00 - Fixes Required

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Note Count changed: 1369 => 1386
AVG NPS changed: 11.04329 => 11.18042
Hand Bias changed: -11 => -6

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Thanks for the notes.

- 23.370-25.941 jumps are vocals, and 26.113-28.513 jumps are piano. Removed 23.884 (it wasn't a syllable?!) and added 26.284
- 38.884 sounds like a continuation of .798 rather than an independent sound
- 44.113 has a low synth
- 1:01.684 has vocals (not a syllable, but pitch changes), but I turned 1:01.770 to hand instead
- 1:10.513 singled
- 1:11.370 jumped for high piano. That'll explain .884 as well
- 1:14.627 changed to [14] to distinguish with .113
- 1:20.455 jumped for vocal pitch changed
- 1:21.827 jumped
- 1:25.598 too dense for hand
- 1:48.741-1:50.455 was piano + kick, and 1:50.798-1:53.541 was vocal + kick. I'm surprised that neither judge got it, but it's true that the section was emptier than what it could've been. I changed the layering; hopefully it will be more clear.
- I feel like ending the chart with the white note sound gives a better closure

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added attribution (song is still permitted under BOF permission)

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Artist changed: ETIA. => ETIA. feat Jenga
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wait I forgot a dot

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Artist changed: ETIA. feat Jenga => ETIA. feat. Jenga
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CQ/FR* issue is resolved. Moved to Accepted

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