Everyone :: FFR Batch Submission
jh05013 - Everyone - Sakuzyo [7.75 / 10]
Autumn 2024 Seasonal Batch
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https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1goVL1D37TyZKlYBfER-ZIZlssHdWdq9-gLSdX6A2sII/edit

Simfile Folder Name

Everyone (jh05013)

Note Count

1552

Chart Length

2:25

Average NPS

10.8785

Estimated Difficulty

75.23

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 22

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 5 3 - 14 4 - 7

Jumps

x 420

Hands

x 28

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 1

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
7 - 21.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
10 - 20.00 nps 1 Second
19 - 19.00 nps 2 Seconds
34 - 17.00 nps 5 Seconds
76 - 15.20 nps 10 Seconds
144 - 14.40 nps 30 Seconds
398 - 13.27 nps 1 Minute
775 - 12.92 nps

Color Count

x 747 (48.13%)
x 496 (31.96%)
x 64 (4.12%)
x 171 (11.02%)
x 60 (3.87%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 14 (0.9%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s
35
28
21
14
7

small fixes

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Hand Bias changed: 20 => 14

Everyone (jh05013) [7.5/10, CQ/FR*]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

1:22.324/1:27.810/1:33.296 - Why no hand? Percussion + Melody
1:36.724 - Why hand? It's just Percussion
1:39.467/1:43.239/1:43.581/1:43.924/1:48.381/1:54.210/1:54.553/1:59.696/1:59.867/2:00.039/2:00.210/2:09.296/2:09.981 - Missing jump? What determines an omitted jump?
*1:41.696-1:52.839 - There's a bunch of wubs within this section. Some of them are stepped, some aren't. What determines this?
1:50.439 - Should be single? Compare 1:39.467
2:06.553/2:12.039 - Should be jump? Compare 2:01.067
2:08.439 - Should be single? Compare 2:02.953

>>Mostly straightforward & consistent. Polish the last third of the file. See asterisk

Judge Score: 7.50 - Fixes Required

Permission: good
Metadata: good
Sync: good

- 13.753 - 14.439: Why no 16th notes here? You could say they're less pronounced, but 13.839 and 14.353 are clearly audible to me and the other notes are there as well. I understand the omission of notes in the build up later, but not exactly sure why these notes were omitted.
- 64.753: This sounds to me like a ghost note, if there is a sound here it's much fainter than the earlier 16ths, I suggest removing.
- 71.610: Same here, hard to hear.
- 74.010: Suggest to put on a column more to the left because of PR.
- 99.468: No jump?
- 101.696: Why are there no notes for this sound? It sounds almost identical to 101.010 except there's nothing.
- 105.296/105.810: Because of the way you stepped the growls earlier, it seems a bit weird to have this section so empty especially since there are growls here too.
- 108.210: Why jump?
- 114.982: Probably done out of difficulty concerns, but this is identical in sound to 115.753.
- 121.296: Why did you end this here? The sound doesn't exactly stop here.
- 114.896: In this section you're stepping the melody with jumps it seems, I wonder why this is a jump there's no melody there's just the kick. I think this section would be way cooler if you'd use jumps for the melody. So make 115.068 and 115.239 jumps instead of 114.896 and 115.153. Especially since you're not using jumps for kicks in places like 112.496 to focus on the melody instead.
- 118.668: This jump should be different from 118.325 for PR.
- 122.782: You have all these bursts for growls at like 121.753 - 122.610, but then you elect to leave spots like 122.782 empty-ish when there are growls there as well, it makes this section slightly incoherent for me.
- 123.810: Another growl, where it's just completely empty?
- 143.525, 144.210, 145.753: More of a stylistic choice, but I think these notes would be nice to include to make it end less abruptly.

Very cool chart, everything plays nicely and nothing about the layering feels off to me. The ending dubstep section does feel a little incoherent to me at times and I think work could be done to make the growls feel more consistent, but the file is acceptable as is.

Judge Score: 8.00 - Accepted

Thanks for the notes. I tried adding some jumps and wubs but now the difficulty curve is steeper than I wanted it to be (which is why I omitted them actually), so a fix is still in progress.

In the meantime:
- 13.753-14.439: I guess it's audible enough, added
- 1:04.753, 1:11.610: audible enough to me
- 1:14.010 moved
- 1:36.724: it's for the percussion that happens every other beat (clap? idk)
- 1:39.124-1:55.581: omitted jumps are for difficulty balance. I added a few of them back though
- 2:08.439 singled

@ositz good to go..?

no I didn't actually upload it yet because I still don't like the current revision. I'll take a look again today.

added 24ths

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1532 => 1551
AVG NPS changed: 10.73832 => 10.8715
Hand Bias changed: 14 => 23

added 1 missing wub

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1551 => 1552
AVG NPS changed: 10.8715 => 10.8785
Hand Bias changed: 23 => 22

CQ/FR* issue is resolved. Moved to Accepted