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devonin - Slime-San - Result Screen - FantomenK [7.75 / 10]
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Trying something a little harder than previous files. I know there's a LOT of jack-like patterning in it but the syncopation makes it a lot easier (IMO) to handle than actual jacks would be.

Similar disclaimer to my other song: If comments are simply just that it could be layered more densely which would increase the difficulty, I prefer to keep things on the easier side unless the belief is that the chart literally wouldn't work without that layering. There are some grace notes that aren't stepped, and there is a very fast triplet buzz that is just one arrow because even a short trill there would make it a LOT harder instead of just a little.

Simfile Folder Name

Slime-San - Result Screen (Devonin)

Note Count

365

Chart Length

1:13

Average NPS

5.2417

Estimated Difficulty

24.22

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 17

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 5 4 - 0

Jumps

x 26

Hands

x 0

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
4 - 12.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
5 - 10.00 nps 1 Second
10 - 10.00 nps 2 Seconds
15 - 7.50 nps 5 Seconds
34 - 6.80 nps 10 Seconds
65 - 6.50 nps 30 Seconds
162 - 5.40 nps 1 Minute
317 - 5.28 nps

Color Count

x 225 (61.64%)
x 0 (0%)
x 140 (38.36%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.9s0.9s0.5s0.5s0.5s0.5s0.5s0.5s
35
28
21
14
7

Permission: good
Metadata: good
Sync: good

- 34.576: Why didn't you include these notes?
- 36.976: ^
- 38.376: Such a cool part of the melody, I know alot of stepping is subjective, but my fingers really want to play these notes.
- 54.376: These jacks are extremely spiky, I'd much rather you'd make these an alternating motion rather than a jack. So in this case column [3] into [4] and in the case of 56.776 [2] into [3] etc.
- 65.876: This section here doesn't belong in a song this easy, you usually don't see syncopated jacks like these in songs this low. I urge you to change in in the way described in my previous note.
- 69.076: Shouldn't this be [1] [2] as well?
- 69.376: Missing note.

Awesome song, awesome chart, I can't really get behind the jacks though, they're too spiky.

Judge Score: 7.50 - Change Recommended

Slime-San - Result Screen (devonin) [8/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

38.276 - Ghost note. Not same noise as 37.676/37.976
44.976 - Should be on [3]
45.076 - Should be on [2]
48.376 - Should be on [2]
50.276 - Should be on [2]
1:08.476/1:09.076 - If the jack noise of 1:09.176-1:10.076 is on [2], then these two notes should be on [2] as well

>>I appreciate your rawdogging of the [2] lane near the end

Judge Score: 8.00 - Accepted

@ositz

44.976 - Should be on [3]
45.076 - Should be on [2]
48.376 - Should be on [2]
50.276 - Should be on [2]

Agreed, corrected.

38.276 - Ghost note. Not same noise as 37.676/37.976

Issue captured (I believe) by change from M0nkeyz

>>I appreciate your rawdogging of the [2] lane near the end

I'm glad you appreciate it, but I have to agree with M0nkeyz that it's too spiky for most people at this range

@M0nkeyz
- 34.576: Why didn't you include these notes?
- 36.976: ^

Added

- 38.376: Such a cool part of the melody, I know a lot of stepping is subjective, but my fingers really want to play these notes.

Wasn't really sure how to do it without it being a jack, hopefully that setup works for you

- 54.376: These jacks are extremely spiky, I'd much rather you'd make these an alternating motion rather than a jack. So in this case column [3] into [4] and in the case of 56.776 [2] into [3] etc.
- 65.876: This section here doesn't belong in a song this easy, you usually don't see syncopated jacks like these in songs this low. I urge you to change in in the way described in my previous note.

Maybe it's the jazz drummer in me, but I don't find the first sets of jacks as hard as even other parts of the song that didn't get remarked on here. I did change the final one in [2] to be [1][3] gallops instead which should be quite a bit easier, and makes the previous jacks the new "hardest part" which I think feels fine to me. [/b]

- 69.376: Missing note.

Added, thanks

- 69.076: Shouldn't this be [1] [2] as well?

I was, in my head, just slowly transitioning across from the [3][4] to the [1][2]s without wanting to just jump right over and be repetitive, but you're right that PR wants them over there. This version has them moved, see if it feels better.[/b]

See comments with fixes

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 360 => 365
AVG NPS changed: 5.16994 => 5.24174
Hand Bias changed: 12 => 17

Moving to DC engine just a little early since fixes were submitted.