Playin' Child :: FFR Batch Submission

basicdrummerman - Playin' Child - chilldive [7.5 / 10]

17th Official Tournament

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Accepted

v9 spreadsheet chilldive

collab with lights.

first take for both of us on a song like this, literally everyone told us it sounds like something bmah would step. so idk exploring new boundaries or something like that. just could not seems to make it fit into a bounty batch slot, rip.

- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "Playin' Child (basicdrummerman & Lights" vs "Playin' Child (basicdrummerman)"

- This file is a collaboration between multiple authors / stepauthors.

Simfile Folder Name

Playin' Child (basicdrummerman & Lights

Note Count

2061

Chart Length

2:55

Average NPS

12.1641

Estimated Difficulty

84.22

First Note

0:05

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -45

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 1 3 - 4 4 - 356

Jumps

								x 447
							

Hands

								x 192
							

Quads

x 4

Color Jumps

								x 10
							

Color Hands

x 4

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
21 - 21.00 nps 2 Seconds
35 - 17.50 nps 5 Seconds
80 - 16.00 nps 10 Seconds
155 - 15.50 nps 30 Seconds
424 - 14.13 nps 1 Minute
807 - 13.45 nps

Color Count

x 505 (24.5%)

x 448 (21.74%)

x 40 (1.94%)

x 775 (37.6%)

x 50 (2.43%)

x 127 (6.16%)

x 31 (1.5%)

x 12 (0.58%)

x 73 (3.54%)

Largest Note Gaps

3.6s1.23s0.67s0.57s0.57s0.57s0.53s0.53s

CC BY: https://chilldive.bandcamp.com/track/playin-child

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my bad, will do for future instances like this.

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Playin' Child (basicdrummerman & Lights) [7.5/10, CQ/FR*]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

6.655 - Why is this jump, but not 7.325?
17.101 - Shouldn't this be [123]? I guess 17.369 can be a different hand pattern due to the addition of the snare
19.043/27.615/49.043/53.329 - Missing note. Recheck the chorus sections for that missing 32nd spot
*19.244-19.780/etc - What noise are these 48ths going to?
19.847 - Sounds closer to 19.825. Same issue with 24.133/49.847/54.133/etc
25.271/29.557/40.539/45.762/50.985/53.262 - Why jump? No percussion
34.244 - Shouldn't this be the jump instead of 34.110?
35.003/43.575/2:12.841 - Ghost note
38.039-38.128 - Technically 64ths
38.396 - Fix jump PR. This is lower pitch than 38.128-38.128
40.137 - If this noise is supposed to be here, then 40.405 would be considered a missing note
46.432 - Same jump pattern, but diff noise from 46.164?
1:10.404 - Should be on [3]. This is lower pitch than 1:10.595-1:10.976
1:11.261/1:11.808/1:12.360 - This is actually two singles
2:01.480 - What noise is this note going to?
2:05.330 - Why jump?
2:09.627 - Should prolly move this away from the trill pattern so as to differentiate itself from the snare rush noise
2:18.533 - Same hand pattern, but diff noise from 2:18.132?
2:22.819 - Same hand pattern, but diff noise from 2:22.417
2:44.917 - Should this be a diff hand pattern due to the added snare? Compare 17.369

>>Straightforward & mostly consistent. See asterisk

Judge Score: 7.50 - Fixes Required

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- 3.039: Should be moved to ~3.024, these notes start a bit late.
- 18.709 - 32.236: This part of the song feels unnecessarily jump heavy to me, I have a hard time discerning what constitutes a jump here. Why are 18.709, 18.977, 20.986, 23.263 etc. jumps? This section feels really messy layering wise.
- 19.334 etc.: Not sure how I feel about these cyan dump notes, it's not immediately clear to me what they're going to and you omit actual sounds to make room for them like 19.647. They're a stylistic choice I don't necessarily agree with, I won't subtract points for it being a stylistic choice, but I do think omitting actual sounds like 19.647 and 21.789 is a bit strange.
- 32.236, 47.236: Arguably not a hand, it's a lot quieter than the hands before it.
- 34.647: This shouldn't be the same jump as 34.914, one is a snare the other is a kick.
- 34,468, 35.004, 43.486 etc.: These 24ths are too late, 35.004 shouldn't be closer to the following 16th than to the 4th.
- 35.383: This snare is omitted, but you do include 35.584. See 43.955.
- 36.298: These notes should be swapped, the 48th has a higher pitch.
- 37.191: Jump.
- 38.397: This should be different from the jumps at 38.129, lower pitch.
- 41.343: Subjective note, but you could make this a 96th grace on [4].
- 48.307 - 64.379: See 18.709.
- 64.178, 64.312: Ghost notes. See 114.293.
- 70.405: Shouldn't form an anchor with the 12th notes, different pitch.
- 72.360: Odd to me that you step this as a jump instead of a grace note.
- 81.566: Shouldn't there be a grace here too?
- 82.395: This 16th is too late and should be a 24th at 82.340.
- 82.934: This should be before the 4th jump, not after.
- 85.273: What's going on here? It should just be a 16th.
- 87.600 + 87.700: These 2 notes are mistimed, they should be on 87.650 and 87.725.
- 91.400: Why not make these graces [1][2][3]? Makes more sense to me pattern wise since the 3rd version of this pattern is [2][3][4].
- 107.864, 108.400, 108.802: Why these jacks?
- 115.766: Some of the patterning here seems inconsistent, you include 115.766 to the clap, but you omit instances like 116.435, some of the notes like 115.900 could be considered notes to the hi-hats as well since the bass starts earlier, in this case at 115.877.
- 115.933: Bit nitpicky for sure, but this is closer to 115.951
- 116.971: Patterning here feels strange again, you're following the hi-hats but not the bass, see 117.077. I would omit the 2 notes after the 4th and just step the note at 117.077.
- 117.819: Here you're following the bass for 2 measures, then at 118.712 you're following the hi-hats.
- You kinda catch my drift, it's not super noticeable when playing but this section could definitely be a bit tighter.
- 121.525: It's kinda hard to implement these toms, but they do feel kinda left out right now lol. I feel like they're an important part of the build up.
- 126.078: Seems like a bit of a ghost note, since you're following the bass here.
- 131.368: Why not just 32nds here?
- 131.770: Ghost note.
- 136.034: Missing note, I would omit the 16th jump, or make it a single.
- 138.400: You can make a very strong argument for this being a jump.
- 138.534: This hand feels like it's overkill, I understand piano + kick + crash = hand, but why is just piano also a hand? Especially since you are layering snare + piano as hands later on at 139.605.
- 165.721: I find jumps a little too heavy for this sound in contrast with all the kicks and snares earlier, but that's subjective.

This chart is really really fun to play, I will rate it highly for that, but I do strongly advice you to take a look at my notes, because there are some sections that feel a bit strange to play, especially the parts with the cyan notes, the cyan notes kinda feel like ghost notes to me and the jump layering isn't super clear to me. Still, nice job on the chart.

Judge Score: 7.50 - Change Recommended

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implemented fixes, got rid of the cyan dump notes D:

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 2110 => 2060
AVG NPS changed: 12.45328 => 12.15817

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CQ/FR* issue is resolved. Moved to Accepted

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fixed a sync issue with slow piano section

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 2060 => 2063
AVG NPS changed: 12.15817 => 12.17588
Hand Bias changed: -46 => -45

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lights yelled at me to fix a section so i fixed skuffed section, had a 4 and 5 jack for no reason

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 2063 => 2061
AVG NPS changed: 12.17588 => 12.16408

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