Thanks for Your Patronage! :: FFR Batch Submission
Mipha - Thanks for Your Patronage! - HOYO-MiX [7.25 / 10]
17th Official Tournament
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i hate dori

Bonus file for this OT would be quite a funny one here honestly.

✔️ This chart has been marked as final and shouldn't receive any more changes.

Simfile Folder Name

Thanks for Your Patronage! (Mipha)

Note Count

692

Chart Length

1:10

Average NPS

10.4269

Estimated Difficulty

62.08

First Note

0:04

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 4

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 2 4 - 11

Jumps

x 196

Hands

x 5

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
14 - 28.00 nps 1 Second
22 - 22.00 nps 2 Seconds
35 - 17.50 nps 5 Seconds
74 - 14.80 nps 10 Seconds
142 - 14.20 nps 30 Seconds
365 - 12.17 nps 1 Minute
638 - 10.63 nps

Color Count

x 303 (43.79%)
x 231 (33.38%)
x 6 (0.87%)
x 136 (19.65%)
x 6 (0.87%)
x 2 (0.29%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 8 (1.16%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.33s
35
28
21
14
7

Sync is quite a bit off

All beats should move so the first beat starts at 1.086 instead of 1.095.

- 2.352: PR here could be better, I'm hearing B-C-A
- 2.711: PR wise this shouldn't be on the same column as 2.442.
- 3.789: PR again not great here, I will stop mentioning it, but it's quite noticeable to me.
- 13.310: Bit nitpicky, but with such a high prominent note I'd prefer this to be on [4].
- 14.747: The notes here speed up, I think you solved the problem of it becoming spiky quite nicely here.
- 21.394: This feels weird as a jump, it's just a lot less intense than the other jumps here.
- 25.346: Missing jump to melody.
- 25.526: Missing note.
- 26.783/26.963: Why are these jumps if 22.652 is a single?
- 29.568: I would omit this note since it's not part of the melody you're highlighting and it distracts from it. 29.208 too, to a lesser extend.
- 31.095: You could make this a single since there's no kick on it and it feels less impactful than the jumps with a kick on them.
- 32.711: Why is this a single, but 33.071 a jump?
- 34.283: Missing note.
- 43.131 (and all other instances): Bit strange having this as a hand, when the 8th after it is so much more intense.
- 44.927 - end: Aside from the PR issues I mentioned earlier this is really fun, probably want to take a closer look at your sync though.

File is enjoyable for sure, I just think it could be polished to be better. Part of me wants to see a harder file where the PR on the jumps for example is more accurate and maybe a bit more hand heavy to account for the heavy hits such as 32.173/32.532. (7/10) FR for the sync and file in general needs some polish.

Judge Score: 7.00 - Fixes Required

Thanks for Your Patronage! (Mipha) [7.5/10, CQ/FR*]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

21.394 - Why jump? No synth/melody
*21.933-29.118/33.430-40.615 - What are the 16ths going to, and why does it randomly disappear/reappear?
25.346 - Missing jump. Melody
28.400 - Why jump? No synth/melody
32.711 - Should be jump?
32.891/33.250 - Should be single?
*44.927-1:07.466 - The speedup gets slightly more offsync as it progresses

>>Mostly straightforward & consistent. See asterisks

Judge Score: 7.50 - Fixes Required

Thank you for the notes.

M0nkeyz:

Offset has been accomodated. My ears are irreparably broken and I can never get the sync of the chart right the first time, it seems.

2.352: On my first thought I thought this was similar, but I guess I was wrong. Amended.
2.711: Amended.
3.789: Moved a bit around, in this intro I fixed around the same, so do please recheck them.
13.310: Can't really accomodate this one, I tried making the 32nds into 24ths but the sweep melody thing doesn't get the attention that it wants to, and moving it to 4 forces a minijack or some sort.
14.747: Yeah I tried two things either by the BPM changes or making the quantizations gradually change but I prefer the 20th -> 24th approach here. BPM changes tend to get kind of messy in the end for that.
21.394: Agreed here. Amended.
25.346: Added in.
25.526: Added in.
26.783 etc.: Probably an error of overthinking here on my end. Made them a single.
29.568: Eh, I think I prefer to keep this since the blips are too noticeable to ignore - the flow doesn't get disruptive that way.
31.095: Sure thing. Added.
32.711: Made it a jump. For 32.882 I made this a single since this was an error as well.
34.283: Technically it does, but I avoid 32nds specifically for this since it's not sharp enough to include.
43.131: Moved so the 8th is a hand instead of the 4th. Did this on the earlier instance as well.
44.927: I had the most fun working on this speedup even if it's just a simple one, but this one's also a headache. I accomodated the sync this time so hopefully it should be fine enough. Let me know if this works!

ositz:

21.394: Fixed.
*21.933-29.118/33.430-40.615: The 16ths are for the blip runs and I included them if they are noticeable. If they disappear or broke them up, usually the patterning around them is hard enough so it doesn't get the same attention as the other jumpstream runs. I however included 16ths on 33.430 for only the first measure and the next instance since I missed them somewhat.
25.346: Added in.
28.400: This was an error, so good catch. Fixed.
32.711: Added.
32.891/33.250: Made them as single.
*44.927-1:07.466: See M0nkeyz's note above.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Offset changed: 1.061 => 1.070
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Note Count changed: 690 => 689
AVG NPS changed: 10.39157 => 10.38172
Hand Bias changed: -4 => 9

My asterisks were addressed. Removing CQ/FR* on my end. Awaiting M0nkeyz's removal

testing Status Update

Stuck in the batch system because it was never changed from FR to accepted/changes recommended, likely as a result of implementation of status update at the time of this submission.

Gonna move this to Accepted and then DC Engine in a couple weeks after to give everyone involved ample enough time to see this & halt if there's a conflict.

- 3.960: PR here is backwards, this could just be a (B)(A)(B)(A) trill

- 9.529 - 9.708: PR here is (A)(C)(B), 9.708 is the same pitch as 9.888 so [2][4][3] would be perfect here.

- I think your jump use is a bit better, but it still feels a bit strange because certain aspects of the melody aren't jumps like the 16ths at 22.912 and 25.786 etc. I know it's hard to implement these, but you could remove jumps like 23.541, 23.631, 23.900 etc. To make the file cleaner, you're currently following alot of different aspects of the song with jumps, I think the file would benefit from a simpler layering scheme. So something like melody = jump + kick/snare = jump would work better imo.

- 43.131: This sounds awful, but I think because this sound is now not consistently stepped as either hands or jumps it feels off, I'd honestly revert this to what you had before where the 4ths are hands and the 8ths are jumps (sorry about that one)

- 44.927: Sync seems good here, still think PR is a bit iffy, but not enough to keep it FR'd.

- These notes aren't deal breakers, BUT I would strongly advice you to take a look at these.

Judge Score: 7.00 - Change Recommended

3.960 - I mean I guess I can make it to 1314 trill instead.
9.529 - Sure.

I wasn't really aiming for what certain aspects of the melody that get the jumps and what not. File's technically evolving over time and different approach feels apt so I had to improvise in making them different each time. It's more like I'm accenting the loudness of the sound instead of melody/kicks.

43.131 - yeah it feels weird as well so I reverted it back. Not sure why I changed it the last time, it's been so long.

Do take another look, thanks for checking once more.

another fix

A new chart file was uploaded.

I still think this file feels a little weird in terms of PR. I think with these fixed the file is ok to go for me.

- 13.930: Pitch on the 16th goes up, it makes more sense on [4] imo.
- 16.714: This feels a little strange on [3] since the pitch is different from 16.894 and 17.433.
- 18.690: Shouldn't this be a jump like 18.331?
- 19.768: This is lower in pitch than 19.589.
- 31.804: Should change this hand as well
- 32.702: This feels weird as a [34] since it's lower in pitch than 32.523. [13] perhaps?
- 44.199, 44.559: Same thing here

13.930 - Moved to 4.
16.714 - I don't think it's that strange, it just feels the same to my ears. (focused on the grouping of 13 sounds rather)
18.690 - Fair enough.
19.768 - I don't notice any distinct differences between that and 19.589, sounds exactly the same to me.
32.702, 44.199, 44.559 - Sure, changed.

and another fix

Also missed some 16ths in 39.438, so amended that too.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 689 => 692
AVG NPS changed: 10.38172 => 10.42692
Hand Bias changed: 9 => 4

Good to go