Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

[Renevatia]

suppose that there should be a good number of miku fans here? :3

so ya..just through whatever you have in mind at me
anything that should be changed, or fixed before i color

I will not change pose, just maybe add stuff to it
or ..add backgrounds..for once =.='

[Xx{Midday}xX]

face looks too masculine. she's not a yandere, or a cool.

she should have a tsundere look. (blushing tsurime)

breast size fine. bust size fine. waist size fine.

miniskirt size fine.

hairlength fine. finger shape fine.

change her face to tsundere and you're clear.

[Renevatia]

hmm the eyes..eh..
ya ..i wanted that expression (dono how to describe it) but keep it ミクらし
...rounder edges?

[Xx{Midday}xX]

Use Kagami Hiiragi and Tohsaka Rin as your example. Tsurime is the proper term for tsundere girl eyes. It's contrapositive to tareme. Notice, all 3 characters have twin tails, tsurime, and tsundere moe. Oh, you can add i love you's rebound avatar in this group. Oh btw, yes, tsundere is the only moe I have ever felt as moe.

Kagamin


Rinrin

[Renevatia]

OOO THX, i think something similar to tohsaka's eyes should work fine lol I love the kagami illust. xD

[Renevatia]

初音ミク
meh..still learning how to color @.@

目を変わりました、
その目の方が少しミクらし見たいそうです。
(lol so lazy, copy and pasted comments >.> )

[who_cares973]

the nose and mouth dont look right O.o

probably just me though >.>

nice coloring btw

[chidori!]

i think her face needs more of an innocent look. eh.

[[TeRa]]

In the colored one her arm coming out of her sleeve looks weird, still amazing though, great work O_O

[Zageron]

If you ask me, that's totally ******* amazing. I would pay good money for something like that.

[Renevatia]

ya..the jesture on that hand is ..kinda weird to draw + the perspective of the wrist, but I swear its a natural pose (no need to break bones to achieve) xD
..shading on it is kinda off ^^:

[i love you]

Wow, i think thats an insane drawing regardless. O_O

lol @ midday

[dayum]

drawing looks good

the fingers look a bit wierd but i mean theyre fingers so who cares xD

shading on the skin isnt very good =/

and the face doesnt look quite right......


overall GJ ;D


edit: lol first post

[Xx{Midnight}xX]

Agreeing with the innocent look that should be there it looks great just add the innocent trait to the face.

[Renevatia]

lol hmm innocent look, shall try to merge that with srs face next time xD ,
easy to do innocent/cute
kinda hard to do innocent/pretty
..maybe thats just me ^^;

[Xx{Midday}xX]

Your current Miku looks too much like this:



Yeah. Miku is not Renji.

Although, her negi zanpakutou stands undefeated.