"False Happiness" by Kienamaru
Posted on: October 24, 2009, at 01:07:05pm

I am slowly entering a state of depression.
For a time you kept me cheerful and alive.
I've lost touch with you and my life is going downhill.
I try to enjoy myself but there is no substitute for love.
A choking sadness is swelling up inside of me.
I try to occupy my mind but my thoughts only return to you.
I'll do whatever I can to remain happy, for your sake.
I just want you to be aware...my happiness is fake.
There is no one else for me. You are someone I can't replace.
You mean too much to me. You are my one obsession.
More than you'll ever know...

1. 1: Sky Kitten
   Posted at 11:14pm on October 31st, 2009

   This is a very strong poem, hun. Very good at expressing your feelings when you are showing that you feel a certain emotion when you know your love is slipping away from your hands. But whenever it slips, your mind is still focused. I am really glad you focus this poem on that particular feeling because this is something that most people can relate to. Amazing job.