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Posted on: September 4, 2008, at 10:54:06pm

Tick
Ti
Ck
T
Ick
Thud goes my head into my desk.
Hours and hours have past in my mind.
Nope only 5 minutes says the clock.
A plus b equals c.
I heard this a million times.. give me something to do besides sit here and die
No reply.
And the boredom goes on.
I get an idea .
Zip.
I open my book
And read
once there was a girl na...Put that book away miss.
Noo!!!
I’m not going to like today.
The speech goes on.
I fly off this plain,
And open my eyes to darkness.
Colors spinning, flying, twirling.
Smash!!
I close then open my eyes.
And I’m back to my class.
The clock reads half an hour to go.
And the boredom goes on…..

1: Cappuccino_girl
Posted at 10:55pm on September 4th, 2008

Something new.. hot off teh press.. adn teh mind haha
its different i like it.. the set up is good. i saw somehintg like it so i tryed it
2: Ash-a-lily
Posted at 10:58pm on September 4th, 2008

cool
3: Cappuccino_girl
Posted at 10:59pm on September 4th, 2008

thanks ash
4: EB_colud
Posted at 11:15pm on September 4th, 2008

cool
plz dont post on my comment page my GF well get mad
5: Harp of Altara
Posted at 11:18pm on September 4th, 2008

It's definitely a change in style from a lot of your previous works, and I think it works pretty well.
As you might know, I'm a big fan of the stream of consciousness style in poetry (and writing), and you utilized it with good effect here. Also, I like onomatopoeia!
My favorite line would have to be: "Colors spinning, flying, twirling." Impressive.
6: Cappuccino_girl
Posted at 5:28pm on September 5th, 2008

yeah i saw it in something so i had to try it and thanks yeah thats like my old style there
7: pina626
Posted at 10:54pm on September 6th, 2008

that..is..awesome..describes so much of school life..which needs to kill over already.lmao..u rock! <3
8: AmreKept
Posted at 5:23pm on December 8th, 2009

Haha, thats pretty good.