The Purest Element

**Cyanite** · 09-6-2007, 06:01 PM

http://download-v5.streamload.com/d5...%20Element.mp3

Third song

C&C appreciated, personally I really like how it's got a much fuller sound to it than my other two songs, and is much more melodically driven. I'm also aware that the two halves of the song are extremely different from each other, which was a result of me starting the song in one mindset and finishing it in another.

OMGfat123 · 09-7-2007, 12:19 AM

It's nice when the piano comes in. Great song Cyanite!

**Zageron** · 09-7-2007, 12:23 AM

I like the beginning. o.o

**Gorlock** · 09-12-2007, 02:42 AM

this is a good track except for the difference in the first and second halves. i understand that you had different mindsets, but you might consider just making 2 separate tracks on this one...

both times when the drums break away (about 1:00 and 2:15) i noticed that they seem to stumble over themselves. perhaps consider fading them out with a different method than using a drum rhythm that wasn't present anywhere else in the track.

i did like the piano in the 2nd half. it seemed to add a pleasant sound to the track. and you're right, it has a full sound to it. not heavy on the low end and not dominating on the high end.

you're talented.
keep it up.

**blindreper1179** · 09-12-2007, 05:26 AM

i have nothing to complain about. i listened to it a couple times, because of getting side tracked. and nothing caught my attention of being misplaced.

9/10

**zajac** · 09-12-2007, 03:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gorlock

this is a good track except for the difference in the first and second halves. i understand that you had different mindsets, but you might consider just making 2 separate tracks on this one...

both times when the drums break away (about 1:00 and 2:15) i noticed that they seem to stumble over themselves. perhaps consider fading them out with a different method than using a drum rhythm that wasn't present anywhere else in the track.

i did like the piano in the 2nd half. it seemed to add a pleasant sound to the track. and you're right, it has a full sound to it. not heavy on the low end and not dominating on the high end.

you're talented.
keep it up.

I completely agree with my BFF 4 lyfe.

**Cyanite** · 09-12-2007, 07:24 PM

thanks for the comments, espcecially your's Gorlock.

**Gorlock** · 09-13-2007, 02:55 AM

yeah Cyanite, no problem. i'm always gonna give an honest opinion. i don't feel like sugar-coating a response just so you like me. :P

i'm all about the music.

09-7-2007, 12:19 AM	#2
OMGfat123 FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Canada FTW! Posts: 208	Re: The Purest Element It's nice when the piano comes in. Great song Cyanite! __________________

09-7-2007, 12:23 AM	#3
Zageron Zageron E. Tazaterra RRR Developer & DevOps Support Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: BC Age: 32 Posts: 6,587	Re: The Purest Element I like the beginning. o.o __________________ Help Develop FFR

09-12-2007, 02:42 AM	#4
Gorlock {Underground Concept} Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Gorlock of Underground Concept w/ PolishPat Posts: 98	Re: The Purest Element this is a good track except for the difference in the first and second halves. i understand that you had different mindsets, but you might consider just making 2 separate tracks on this one... both times when the drums break away (about 1:00 and 2:15) i noticed that they seem to stumble over themselves. perhaps consider fading them out with a different method than using a drum rhythm that wasn't present anywhere else in the track. i did like the piano in the 2nd half. it seemed to add a pleasant sound to the track. and you're right, it has a full sound to it. not heavy on the low end and not dominating on the high end. you're talented. keep it up. __________________

09-13-2007, 02:55 AM	#8
Gorlock {Underground Concept} Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Gorlock of Underground Concept w/ PolishPat Posts: 98	Re: The Purest Element yeah Cyanite, no problem. i'm always gonna give an honest opinion. i don't feel like sugar-coating a response just so you like me. :P i'm all about the music. __________________

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