Trance/Classical Composition

4ERO · 01-13-2007, 03:04 PM

Would like some feedback.
Influenced by Banya, DJ Taka, DJ Amuro, and Chopin of course.
Please don't hesitate to point out any flaws in the production or in the music, I'm trying to get better at this.

http://www.macjams.com/song/27506

**Pyroshock** · 01-13-2007, 03:45 PM

The kick is really flat.

Other than that, this is a good track. The piano is quite nice.

4ERO · 01-13-2007, 06:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pyroshock

The kick is really flat.

Other than that, this is a good track. The piano is quite nice.

Think a little EQ would fix that? or maybe a sharper kick?

Aerogroove · 01-13-2007, 06:08 PM

Yeah the kick is a bit too punchy and small. Try some compression and equalization especially on the drums, the mix sounds a little muddy and "small," I don't really know any other word for that. Cool piece all in all though.

shadowraikiri · 01-13-2007, 06:27 PM

rofl no comment for cuz that website didnt play for my comp lmao damit your song hates me, make it change. xD

**hi19hi19** · 01-13-2007, 07:06 PM

by muddy, I think AG means that it lacks punch. The first part, until the piano, strikes me as "Cool, there's some bleeps and a drum and some fuzzy sounds in the back. Um, where's the song?" I think the melody (if there is one hidden in there) should be brought out more.

Once the piano starts, it gets awesome.

I will also agree that the drums are weak. The snare sounds like a garbage can and the kick drum sounds... like a bad kick drum.

Hollywood13 · 01-13-2007, 07:38 PM

hey i just heard the song, i like the piece overall, good pace and the piano work is easy to listen to as well. Nothing negative or anything i'd have changed, i look forward to more of your songs and good luck getting them stepped

4ERO · 01-13-2007, 11:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shadowraikiri

rofl no comment for cuz that website didnt play for my comp lmao damit your song hates me, make it change. xD

If you can't play it in the browser, you can always hit the download button on the right. Or try a different browser. Sorry for the inconvinience

4ERO · 01-13-2007, 11:16 PM

By the way, this is all really good feedback! Thanks alot to everyone who posted.

**iPatcH** · 01-15-2007, 06:06 AM

Wow, I haven't seen AG here in ages.

Anyways, yeah, what he said.

01-13-2007, 03:04 PM	#1
4ERO FFR Player Join Date: May 2006 Location: Minneapolis Age: 37 Posts: 60	Trance/Classical Composition Would like some feedback. Influenced by Banya, DJ Taka, DJ Amuro, and Chopin of course. Please don't hesitate to point out any flaws in the production or in the music, I'm trying to get better at this. http://www.macjams.com/song/27506 __________________ CVSYM: pay $100 at the Apple store jet88: never! jet88: there's got to be a torrent or something

01-13-2007, 03:45 PM	#2
Pyroshock ε=-dΦ/dt Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: College Station, TX Age: 33 Posts: 1,170	Re: Trance/Classical Composition The kick is really flat. Other than that, this is a good track. The piano is quite nice. __________________ http://pyroshock.bandcamp.com http://soundcloud.com/pyroshock

01-13-2007, 06:08 PM	#4
Aerogroove FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Santa Barbara, CA Age: 37 Posts: 140	Re: Trance/Classical Composition Yeah the kick is a bit too punchy and small. Try some compression and equalization especially on the drums, the mix sounds a little muddy and "small," I don't really know any other word for that. Cool piece all in all though. __________________

01-13-2007, 06:27 PM	#5
shadowraikiri FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: On a rock on a planet in a solar system in a galaxy in a universe in a multiverse in a megaverse. Posts: 269	Re: Trance/Classical Composition rofl no comment for cuz that website didnt play for my comp lmao damit your song hates me, make it change. xD

01-13-2007, 07:06 PM	#6
hi19hi19 lol happy Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: DESTINY Age: 35 Posts: 12,194	Re: Trance/Classical Composition by muddy, I think AG means that it lacks punch. The first part, until the piano, strikes me as "Cool, there's some bleeps and a drum and some fuzzy sounds in the back. Um, where's the song?" I think the melody (if there is one hidden in there) should be brought out more. Once the piano starts, it gets awesome. I will also agree that the drums are weak. The snare sounds like a garbage can and the kick drum sounds... like a bad kick drum. __________________

01-13-2007, 07:38 PM	#7
Hollywood13 FFR Player Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 38	Re: Trance/Classical Composition hey i just heard the song, i like the piece overall, good pace and the piano work is easy to listen to as well. Nothing negative or anything i'd have changed, i look forward to more of your songs and good luck getting them stepped

01-13-2007, 11:16 PM	#9
4ERO FFR Player Join Date: May 2006 Location: Minneapolis Age: 37 Posts: 60	Re: Trance/Classical Composition By the way, this is all really good feedback! Thanks alot to everyone who posted. __________________ CVSYM: pay $100 at the Apple store jet88: never! jet88: there's got to be a torrent or something

01-15-2007, 06:06 AM	#10
iPatcH Swamp Lemons Rule Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: not detroit you idiots Age: 37 Posts: 3,370	Re: Trance/Classical Composition Wow, I haven't seen AG here in ages. Anyways, yeah, what he said. __________________ put on a donk on it

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