First song...

[A-J-A-X]

First time I ever actually completed something I was ok with.

Please tell me what you think.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=648619

[Starshot]

For a first song, that honestly was not bad at all.

You're a lot better off then some beginners, for you know how to use volume envelopes. Or, my ears could be on the fritz, who knows.

Oh, and the ending chord needs some slight adjusting, FYI.

[A-J-A-X]

Originally Posted by Starshot

For a first song, that honestly was not bad at all.

You're a lot better off then some beginners, for you know how to use volume envelopes. Or, my ears could be on the fritz, who knows.

Oh, and the ending chord needs some slight adjusting, FYI.

Thanks. The only reason I know how to do the envelope thing is because I liked to listen to that "20 Bars song" thing in FL studio. Then I was just looking at pattern 2 and then I fould that Filter Cutoff graph w/ that diagonal line.

[wickedawesomeful]

Originally Posted by Starshot

For a first song, that honestly was not bad at all.

You're a lot better off then some beginners, for you know how to use volume envelopes. Or, my ears could be on the fritz, who knows.

Oh, and the ending chord needs some slight adjusting, FYI.

I pretty much agree here. This was actually really good for a first song. However, it's retardedly repetitive, but that's to be expected. If you keep working on electronic music, you'll get better in no time.