My TWG Story(Trend-Whore!)

Tps222 · 07-17-2005, 05:15 PM

Well, to whore the story telling trend, I'm gonna pots my TWG story, because I like it, as the game progresses, the story will get longer.

3….2….1….Ignition! That was the last thing the 12 space explorers heard before taking off. They were part of a secret organization known as FFR, which stood for Following Frozen Rocks. The goal of this group was to track meteors that were on a collision course towards Earth, and using the latest technology, divert them. This time, there was a far more serious problem, not only was there a meteor bigger then any other seen by this crew, but, there were traitors aboard the ship as well……

“Attention”, exclaimed Colonel Smithers, leader of the FFR department. “We have received reports of a meteor hurling towards earth bigger then any before”. “Bigger the Tass’s ego”, smirked Tasuke”. “Ha-ha, funny Tasuke, now let’s get back to the mission”. “Thank you M-A-C”, bellowed the commander, showing annoyance. “Now, the meteor is on a course to hit earth within the next week, and if you don’t somehow destroy it by then, Earth was we know it will be gone”. Demon of the Comet spoke up ad asked “Colonel, if you don’t mind me asking, why wasn’t the meteor discovered years in advance,”? “Well, there’s something different about this meteor, but we don’t have time for that now, the important thing is getting rid of it”. “Right now, you need to set up base on the moon, there is a sufficient amount supplies for you guys to live there for 2 days, I will update you then, commander out”. The screen made a weird bloop sound, and the crew was left their slightly annoyed. “I never liked that guy,” exclaimed ddr_dude. Mattc16 suggested “Well, we better get some sleep, tomorrow, we set base on the moon”.

Tasuke was the first one up, and when he walked into psychic25’s bunk, he let out a high pitched scream. PsYcHoZeRoSk8eR was one of he many who ran over to find out what happened. “What the hell, its 6 a.m., what’s wrong Tasuke,”? “It’s…It’s…. psychic25,”! Everyone looked at his body. “Why is his body so gray,” asked NightSonnett? “It seems as he somehow got the air sucked out of him,” replied Demon Of The Comet. “Who would do such a thing,” wondered ddr_dude? “Look, there’s a tape, under his bed”, noticed M-A-C. Demon of the Comet grabbed it and popped into the space VCR. A black shadow appeared and a god-like voice started talking. “Greetings earthlings, It is I, Zanzibar, leader of the highly intelligent planet Fluffles”. The crowd bursted out in laughter. Somebody yelled shutup, though, the voice was hard to decipher. The tape spoke again. “This meteor isn’t any normal meteor, it’s a capsule of 200 Fluffleoleons heading towards Earth to destroy all humans. “ I just got that game, it rox,” exclaimed PsYcHoZeRoSk8eR. The video spoke again. “You may be wondering, wouldn’t the meteor just take out earth as soon as it hits it? Well, it won’t because it is coated with a special coating that when it reacts with the elements in your atmosphere, it will dissolve, leaving the soldiers in battle mode. “But why, why are you attacking us,” asked M-A-C worriedly. “Well, back before dinosaurs, there was a race of humans. Much like the race today, but much more advanced. Think of how mankind would be if technology developed the same was as it is now in 500k years. That would be us. Though, we abused our resources, and were forced to leave the earth. Though, one idiot remained, Zacariah Bush. He mated with a monkey, and lead to the 2nd human race, you. “Ah, that explains old George,” snickered ddr_dude. The tape began talking again “So, we monitored the situation here on Earth, and it seems as you have repeated the same mistakes as we have, but at an accelerated speed. It seems you will witness another ice age, as we did. Luckily, we had the technology to escape and colonize Fluffles. Unfortunately for you, you don’t have the technology to achieve this task, and this, to save you from suffering, we are going to kill all of you.

Not only are we attacking Earth, but to insure you aren’t going to mess up our plans, we have deployed 2 agents onto your ship. I see that your friend already found that out.” With the reference to psychic, Tasuke flipped out, “he was a good guy, you are all barbaric monsters, were going to kill every last one of you.” “We challenge you to a game, if you can find out our 2 agents, and kill them, then we will leave you alone, and possibly to correct your mistakes, so, happy hunting.” “Come on gang, we have to find out who it is,” responded M-A-C. “What about the moon landing,” wondered NightSonnett? “Well, we should continue with the mission, not continuing would be what the Fluffleoleons would want.” So, let’s set up camp, and find these barbarians.

**PsYcHoZeRoSk8eR** · 07-17-2005, 07:06 PM

its good, but it needs to be finished.... that should happen soon enough since we already started. Best part is when you make fun of Bush.

pfff · 07-17-2005, 07:10 PM

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Originally Posted by PsYcHoZeRoSk8eR

its good, but it needs to be finished.... that should happen soon enough since we already started. Best part is when you make fun of Bush.

ditto

blahblah18 · 07-18-2005, 06:05 AM

way to appeal to the masses... one's writing shohuld be what you want, and therefore the opinions of others should be irrelevant

Tps222 · 07-18-2005, 06:56 AM

O it is, what they say will have no affect on my story, as I already had it typed up, I'm just not posting it yet.

07-17-2005, 05:15 PM	#1
Tps222 FFR Player Join Date: Nov 2004 Age: 35 Posts: 6,168	My TWG Story(Trend-Whore!) Well, to whore the story telling trend, I'm gonna pots my TWG story, because I like it, as the game progresses, the story will get longer. 3….2….1….Ignition! That was the last thing the 12 space explorers heard before taking off. They were part of a secret organization known as FFR, which stood for Following Frozen Rocks. The goal of this group was to track meteors that were on a collision course towards Earth, and using the latest technology, divert them. This time, there was a far more serious problem, not only was there a meteor bigger then any other seen by this crew, but, there were traitors aboard the ship as well…… “Attention”, exclaimed Colonel Smithers, leader of the FFR department. “We have received reports of a meteor hurling towards earth bigger then any before”. “Bigger the Tass’s ego”, smirked Tasuke”. “Ha-ha, funny Tasuke, now let’s get back to the mission”. “Thank you M-A-C”, bellowed the commander, showing annoyance. “Now, the meteor is on a course to hit earth within the next week, and if you don’t somehow destroy it by then, Earth was we know it will be gone”. Demon of the Comet spoke up ad asked “Colonel, if you don’t mind me asking, why wasn’t the meteor discovered years in advance,”? “Well, there’s something different about this meteor, but we don’t have time for that now, the important thing is getting rid of it”. “Right now, you need to set up base on the moon, there is a sufficient amount supplies for you guys to live there for 2 days, I will update you then, commander out”. The screen made a weird bloop sound, and the crew was left their slightly annoyed. “I never liked that guy,” exclaimed ddr_dude. Mattc16 suggested “Well, we better get some sleep, tomorrow, we set base on the moon”. Tasuke was the first one up, and when he walked into psychic25’s bunk, he let out a high pitched scream. PsYcHoZeRoSk8eR was one of he many who ran over to find out what happened. “What the hell, its 6 a.m., what’s wrong Tasuke,”? “It’s…It’s…. psychic25,”! Everyone looked at his body. “Why is his body so gray,” asked NightSonnett? “It seems as he somehow got the air sucked out of him,” replied Demon Of The Comet. “Who would do such a thing,” wondered ddr_dude? “Look, there’s a tape, under his bed”, noticed M-A-C. Demon of the Comet grabbed it and popped into the space VCR. A black shadow appeared and a god-like voice started talking. “Greetings earthlings, It is I, Zanzibar, leader of the highly intelligent planet Fluffles”. The crowd bursted out in laughter. Somebody yelled shutup, though, the voice was hard to decipher. The tape spoke again. “This meteor isn’t any normal meteor, it’s a capsule of 200 Fluffleoleons heading towards Earth to destroy all humans. “ I just got that game, it rox,” exclaimed PsYcHoZeRoSk8eR. The video spoke again. “You may be wondering, wouldn’t the meteor just take out earth as soon as it hits it? Well, it won’t because it is coated with a special coating that when it reacts with the elements in your atmosphere, it will dissolve, leaving the soldiers in battle mode. “But why, why are you attacking us,” asked M-A-C worriedly. “Well, back before dinosaurs, there was a race of humans. Much like the race today, but much more advanced. Think of how mankind would be if technology developed the same was as it is now in 500k years. That would be us. Though, we abused our resources, and were forced to leave the earth. Though, one idiot remained, Zacariah Bush. He mated with a monkey, and lead to the 2nd human race, you. “Ah, that explains old George,” snickered ddr_dude. The tape began talking again “So, we monitored the situation here on Earth, and it seems as you have repeated the same mistakes as we have, but at an accelerated speed. It seems you will witness another ice age, as we did. Luckily, we had the technology to escape and colonize Fluffles. Unfortunately for you, you don’t have the technology to achieve this task, and this, to save you from suffering, we are going to kill all of you. Not only are we attacking Earth, but to insure you aren’t going to mess up our plans, we have deployed 2 agents onto your ship. I see that your friend already found that out.” With the reference to psychic, Tasuke flipped out, “he was a good guy, you are all barbaric monsters, were going to kill every last one of you.” “We challenge you to a game, if you can find out our 2 agents, and kill them, then we will leave you alone, and possibly to correct your mistakes, so, happy hunting.” “Come on gang, we have to find out who it is,” responded M-A-C. “What about the moon landing,” wondered NightSonnett? “Well, we should continue with the mission, not continuing would be what the Fluffleoleons would want.” So, let’s set up camp, and find these barbarians.

07-18-2005, 06:05 AM	#4
blahblah18 FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: NOW BLAHTOPIA Posts: 1,662	RE: Re: RE: My TWG Story(Trend-Whore!) way to appeal to the masses... one's writing shohuld be what you want, and therefore the opinions of others should be irrelevant __________________ but for now... postCount++

07-18-2005, 06:56 AM	#5
Tps222 FFR Player Join Date: Nov 2004 Age: 35 Posts: 6,168	RE: Re: RE: My TWG Story(Trend-Whore!) O it is, what they say will have no affect on my story, as I already had it typed up, I'm just not posting it yet.

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