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![]() Ok This was something I did during Japanese 1. The drawing isn't my best because I didn't have much time to do it. Still check it out. It's called
"Watermelon Fight."
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![]() I like the flame effect.
PS: In frame 7, you wrote his name as "Shindji" instead of "Shinji". Ji is Shi with ten ten.
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![]() Actually I referenced Shinji from my Japanese textbook I use in school and it said Ji was Chi with ten ten. Unless the Japanese are idiots
or the Americans misprinted, I'm not sure.
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om nom nom nom.
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![]() I'm completely sure Ji is Shi with ten-ten... <3 for another Japanese 1 student..Though since we have block scheduleing, I'll be taking Japanese 2 after Christmas break.
That looks great, though..
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![]() Do I smell weekly Manga strip? All in favor say yay! or Nay!
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![]() no writing here...
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![]() nice style ya got there
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![]() Next time use a ruler and better writing and it might be good.
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![]() I cant tell which character is which...try mixing up their hair styles a bit...or something. Or give one an eye-patch.
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![]() I went all the way to the corner to start reading and I was dissapointed
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![]() Next time, do it outside of class, maybe try some color, and set it up so that it is skinny
to fit on the webpage without scrolling sideways. For a final suggestion: use hair that sticks up or out more. Then, use more intriguing plot. watermelons can't hold the attention of most people.
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![]() Wow. I seriously don't need to hear anything from you, considering you just joined a few months ago.
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![]() i joined 7 days before you, can i say it sucks?
actually you just need to put more effort into your drawings. And storyline. And concept.
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![]() You people just skipped over the sentences before the actual picture didn't you? Done in class. During school. For Fun. Is that too hard to comprehend?
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