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Old 10-9-2004, 01:38 PM   #1
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I wrote this poem when i first hooked up with my g/f

The Demon Inside

Can you help me fight this demon inside
It grows stronger when I'm not with you
It loves all the dirty thoughts of you
And that is why I need you

When I'm with you I just fall into your eyes
My mind goes clear, I have nothing to lose
I feel free from it all when I hold you close
Every kiss we make, makes him weak

But at night the demon comes back strong
Turns me into someone I don't like
It feels cold when theres nothing of yourself
Being controlled hurts worse then controlling

Can you help me fight this demon inside
It grows stronger when I'm not with you
It loves all the dirty thoughts of you
And that is why I need you

So stay with me, be my angel
Don't be scared, just hold my hand
Together we can fight this off
And when we do, I'll know
It's true, that I was meant to be with you

Can you help me fight this demon inside
It grows stronger when I'm not with you
It loves all the dirty thoughts of you

When I'm with you I just fall into your eyes
My mind goes clear, I have nothing to lose
I feel free from it all when I hold you close
Every kiss we make, makes him weak

So stay with me and help me fight
My angel.
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Old 10-9-2004, 01:40 PM   #2
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emo++
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Old 10-9-2004, 01:45 PM   #3
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...touching...
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Old 10-9-2004, 04:58 PM   #4
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it seems like more of a song that a poem 'cos poems don't usually have choruses.
As to what it means...

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Old 10-10-2004, 02:05 AM   #5
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Reminds me of:

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Originally Posted by Bjork in the song "Unravel"

While you are away
My heart comes undone
Slowly unravels
In a ball of yarn
The devil collects it
With a grin
Our love
In a ball of yarn

He'll never return it

So when you come back
We'll have to make new love

He'll never return it

When you come back
We'll have to make new love
If I had to guess, it would be the longing for your girlfriend or you are a Werewolf...or both.
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Old 10-10-2004, 02:28 AM   #6
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You want to explode in your pants but you have no girl or pr0n around? I dunno. This is a little weird. O_o
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Old 10-10-2004, 02:29 AM   #7
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GUNNA GET DIRTEHHH


ITS ABOUT TIME FOR MAH ARRIVAL
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Old 10-17-2004, 12:39 PM   #8
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Emo sucks...I don't like poetry too much...I think pictures are more powerful.
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Old 10-17-2004, 02:07 PM   #9
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unit. this is the critical thinking forum. please have something meaningful to say before posting here. that goes for everyone as well.
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Old 10-17-2004, 02:25 PM   #10
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You want to explode in your pants but you have no girl or pr0n around? I dunno. This is a little weird. O_o
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Old 10-23-2004, 05:10 PM   #11
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lonelyness!
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Old 10-23-2004, 08:09 PM   #12
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If I had to guess, it would be the longing for your girlfriend or you are a Werewolf...or both.
i also thoguht that perhaps there was a drinking problem or drug problem or violence problem or abuse problem or racing problem when this demon comes forth. jus speculation though.
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Old 10-25-2004, 01:39 PM   #13
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It could be you're gay...but you don't want to be.
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Old 10-31-2004, 08:18 PM   #14
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It means you masterbate (or want to) at the thought of you and her doing the dirty, but when you're together, you don't have that urge. EMO++.

It's not like that poem is hard to understand. It's not some huge metaphor that is like 'ogm so meny interpertashuns uv dat peom omg hardcor poem riter ther.'

If you perhaps used some more metaphors, you could...I dunno...have more than one interpretations of it, but it's not really hard to guess on what it is about. Chromer said it best.

"It loves all the dirty thoughts of you " Dead give away. You don't even have to "gues what is means". That sentence right there gives it away,
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