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I wrote this poem when i first hooked up with my g/f
The Demon Inside Can you help me fight this demon inside It grows stronger when I'm not with you It loves all the dirty thoughts of you And that is why I need you When I'm with you I just fall into your eyes My mind goes clear, I have nothing to lose I feel free from it all when I hold you close Every kiss we make, makes him weak But at night the demon comes back strong Turns me into someone I don't like It feels cold when theres nothing of yourself Being controlled hurts worse then controlling Can you help me fight this demon inside It grows stronger when I'm not with you It loves all the dirty thoughts of you And that is why I need you So stay with me, be my angel Don't be scared, just hold my hand Together we can fight this off And when we do, I'll know It's true, that I was meant to be with you Can you help me fight this demon inside It grows stronger when I'm not with you It loves all the dirty thoughts of you When I'm with you I just fall into your eyes My mind goes clear, I have nothing to lose I feel free from it all when I hold you close Every kiss we make, makes him weak So stay with me and help me fight My angel. |
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嗚呼
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emo++
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aka uAnimals
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...touching...
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it seems like more of a song that a poem 'cos poems don't usually have choruses.
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(The Fat's Sabobah)
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Hookers and Blow
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You want to explode in your pants but you have no girl or pr0n around? I dunno. This is a little weird. O_o
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GUNNA GET DIRTEHHH
ITS ABOUT TIME FOR MAH ARRIVAL |
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Join Date: May 2004
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Emo sucks...I don't like poetry too much...I think pictures are more powerful.
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unit. this is the critical thinking forum. please have something meaningful to say before posting here. that goes for everyone as well.
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lonelyness!
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~Bang that beat Harder~
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It could be you're gay...but you don't want to be.
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It means you masterbate (or want to) at the thought of you and her doing the dirty, but when you're together, you don't have that urge. EMO++.
It's not like that poem is hard to understand. It's not some huge metaphor that is like 'ogm so meny interpertashuns uv dat peom omg hardcor poem riter ther.' If you perhaps used some more metaphors, you could...I dunno...have more than one interpretations of it, but it's not really hard to guess on what it is about. Chromer said it best. "It loves all the dirty thoughts of you " Dead give away. You don't even have to "gues what is means". That sentence right there gives it away,
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