06-25-2013, 11:46 PM | #1 |
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Displaced (Work In Progress)
DISPLACED (work in progress)
https://soundcloud.com/measwork2/displacedv08 Sorry for the absence! All these medications have been kicking my butt big time but I'm feeling well enough to get back into singing and recording more work for Undercover Apple's 2nd release. This one is called Displaced (Empty Room / Empty Face) and is honestly really about how I've been feeling the last 6 months. As you may or may not know, I've been diagnosed with an autoimmune disease which basically attacks my kidney like no tomorrow and there isn't a treatment for it, so basically it will lose its function until it can't filter anymore and I will need dialysis (or a transplant if I'm lucky, but that'll just be resetting the hourglass until it happens again). [Lyrics] Words fell out from our mouths Like they had so much weight Each syllable was so heavy All their meanings filled up the empty space The time has come For me to say sorry For what I've become An empty room An empty face A hollow boy At home when he's displaced Conversation in a pause There's something wrong with the reels As the film spins uncontrollably Each scene led up to how I feel The time has come For me to say sorry For what I've become An empty room An empty face A hollow boy At home when he's displaced In light of all this though, I have found about more about myself and sometimes being "displaced' is actually comforting and depressing at the same time. So far I have the 1st and 2nd verses recorded with the chorus (Emie will be singing along side me in the chorus as well) and the bridge isn't written yet so there's just some filler music for the last quarter of the song. Thanks for listening!
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06-26-2013, 12:03 AM | #2 |
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Re: Displaced (Work In Progress)
Welcome back! Like the chune
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06-27-2013, 02:30 PM | #3 |
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Sounds like you have the same disease as my old man. Sucks to hear about that, and hope you get better.
Song's great, but kinda lacks that cozy melancholic feel of your other UA songs that I love so much. Guessing it's not related to UA even though Emie's in it? |
06-29-2013, 12:31 PM | #4 |
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Thanks for listening to the both of you!
So far I have about 8 songs penned out, some more traditional UA style and some other more tapping into my singer/songwriter acoustic themed work. Going for more variety in the next release McK, what does your father have if you don't me asking?
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06-29-2013, 01:52 PM | #5 |
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OMG NYESSSS DJMEAS
i still have your One Thousand Cranes in progress for FFR
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06-30-2013, 12:33 PM | #6 |
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Not sure, but his liver's gone to shit. He's got cirrhosis and whatnot, and apparently getting a transplant won't do him much good as it'll inevitably happen again later down the road. I don't think it's the same as what you have though - there seems to be a treatment for whatever it is he's got.
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07-1-2013, 12:42 AM | #7 |
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LOL I thought everyone forgot about that one
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Hope the best for your father! KgZ, thank you for listening!
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