What is wrong with this?

**championanwar** · 08-22-2012, 11:51 AM

http://soundcloud.com/championanwar/what-is-wrong-with-this

I swear there is something wrong with this I can't put my finger on, can somebody help me?

a silly wip i wanted to make into an album track-

**rushyrulz** · 08-22-2012, 12:32 PM

That ostinato gets to be rather annoying about halfway in.

**Reincarnate** · 08-22-2012, 12:59 PM

The triple beep-beep-beep thing for some reason feels like a monotonous distraction past the :43 point. Maybe bring it back in after you let the drums do their thing for a while.

08-22-2012, 12:32 PM	#2
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