06-26-2009, 01:42 PM
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FFR Player
Join Date: Jun 2009
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Jigsaw's OP!
This is kind of my test song. This is my first song with sound clips.
http://www.mediafire.com/?zqw2wxuvmkc Tell me what you think! And if anyone steps it and submits it i'll be very very grateful! Its called Jigsaw's OP, and its BPM = 140. EDIT: Or check it out at http://www.myspace.com/nathanmillerband  Last edited by Congregate; 06-26-2009 at 02:07 PM.. |
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06-26-2009, 02:06 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2006
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Age: 37
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Re: Jigsaw's OP!
Intro is looooooooooooooong
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06-26-2009, 02:08 PM
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#TeamAnimal
Join Date: May 2006
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Re: Jigsaw's OP!
The beginning really dragged on. And right after that you didnt keep an evil tone at all, I woulda rather seen that than some sort of cheesy techno.
It's also too repetitive to be a stepfile, from what i see. But yeah, I liked the beginning up to 30 seconds then it kinda went downhill. |
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06-26-2009, 02:15 PM
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Join Date: Jun 2009
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Re: Jigsaw's OP!
I like the constructive criticism, Ill definatly cut down the beginning a little, then make my melodies minor.
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