Feed me feedback

wickedawesomeful · 05-31-2009, 10:21 PM

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been working on this since like thursday

I'm pretty close to done

Any feedback you guys could give would be great thanks

ps. yes I know the transition at ~2:00 is sketchy, I'm working on it

EDIT: 98% done
http://www.sendspace.com/file/sxqk5y

Better EQ'ing, some changes near the end, and an intro

Erothyme · 05-31-2009, 11:43 PM

This definitely had some moments, friend.

Keep it up, you're improving.

wickedawesomeful · 06-1-2009, 12:15 AM

NFD · 06-1-2009, 12:22 AM

I liked it, what do you use.

wickedawesomeful · 06-1-2009, 12:24 AM

FL Studio and Ableton Live.

And thanks for the positive feedback guys, but what I really need is the negative feedback. I'd ask my mom if I just wanted to hear it was great :P

What's wrong with it?

**zajac** · 06-1-2009, 12:41 AM

No, really, sounds greats... Sounds like you're doing a great job with the mastering, and I'm glad to hear something like this! There's a lot that I would love to compliment, but since you're looking for mostly 'negative' feedback, to help improve... Well...

I know the track isn't done, but from a DJ's perspective, I'd definitely recommend building up an intense intro, AT LEAST 30 seconds long, no more than 1:30...

When you have the track kind of pick up at :15 with the vocals and the extra synth, I would recommend introducing extra percussion, possibly on the offbeat of every kick to make the percussion fuller and such...

Maybe also side-chain the first synth you start off with, with the kick, to kind of bring it out more for the buildup...

Also, I'm previewing the track through my Sony V700 DJing headphones, and I'm hearing a nice bassline, but I feel like you could bring out the kicks just a TINY bit more to give it that extra oomph...

Also, use the vocals you have some more... You already have 'em in there, so play with them more, maybe for when you fine-tune your buildup...

Lastly, at :30 you bring in an effect or synth that's side-chained to the kick, but I'd recommend keeping that in there for the duration of a full :15 or :30 and building it up for the best drop... Up to you on the direction you wanna go...

But like you even said, at 2:00 and especially at 2:15 it just sounds WAYYY too busy, like you're bringing in everything you have just for the sake of bringing everything in at once...

But yeah. Those are all of my suggestions at least... But again, all in all, you're doing an amazing job, and I'm looking forward to more versions of the track, especially once completed...

Again, if you take my intro (and even outro) suggestion to heart, I will guarantee, with your permission, I'll drop this in some of my demo mix CD's as well as live PA at clubs...

Again. Keep up the great work!

wickedawesomeful · 06-1-2009, 01:37 AM

What do you mean by "offbeat?" The downbeat?

you're suggesting that I mm-tss-ah-tss? hahaha

EDIT: new version, see first post

http://www.sendspace.com/file/sxqk5y

**zajac** · 06-1-2009, 03:29 AM

Yeah, meant the downbeat haha

But dooder, the file isn't working? Wrong link maybe?

wickedawesomeful · 06-1-2009, 10:53 AM

Damn, that's weird, it was working last night when I uploaded it. Let me reupload

edit: fuuuck mediafire is being retarded. I've uploaded it twice and gotten that same result, and the file is DEFINITELY in my files. here's a sendspace...

http://www.sendspace.com/file/sxqk5y

Congregate · 06-21-2009, 09:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by wickedawesomeful

FL Studio and Ableton Live.

And thanks for the positive feedback guys, but what I really need is the negative feedback. I'd ask my mom if I just wanted to hear it was great :P

What's wrong with it?

Frankly Connor, i'm pretty sure if you asked your mom, she'd just yell at you and tell you your going into the military, and start bitching at you about how bad your family is(:

Nathan

who_cares973 · 06-21-2009, 09:49 PM

very nice its something id listen to more than once

wickedawesomeful · 06-21-2009, 11:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Congregate

Frankly Connor, i'm pretty sure if you asked your mom, she'd just yell at you and tell you your going into the military, and start bitching at you about how bad your family is(:

Nathan

oh shut the **** up you little bitch lol we gotta chill sometime cuz

and thanks dude I got a new track up

http://www.myspace.com/iplndrmi

it'd help me out if you guys could add me and ****, trying to get my music out there

Congregate · 06-22-2009, 11:12 AM

For sure.

Me too, its my better one... On the top.

Check it out.

Quote:

Originally Posted by wickedawesomeful

it'd help me out if you guys could add me and ****, trying to get my music out there

I'm here too(:

wickedawesomeful · 06-22-2009, 12:24 PM

****ing threadjacker go away

Congregate · 06-22-2009, 10:54 PM

Thats right.

05-31-2009, 10:21 PM	#1
wickedawesomeful Carls, Girls, & Drugs Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tosh's noose. Age: 33 Posts: 3,888	Feed me feedback <old link removed> been working on this since like thursday I'm pretty close to done Any feedback you guys could give would be great thanks ps. yes I know the transition at ~2:00 is sketchy, I'm working on it EDIT: 98% done http://www.sendspace.com/file/sxqk5y Better EQ'ing, some changes near the end, and an intro __________________ http://dozemusic.com/ Last edited by wickedawesomeful; 06-1-2009 at 10:54 AM..

05-31-2009, 11:43 PM	#2
Erothyme FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: VA Age: 35 Posts: 2,033	Re: Feed me feedback This definitely had some moments, friend. Keep it up, you're improving. __________________ erothyme.net (Purchase my album!) - Rithum - last.fm - discogs - ACIDplanet - Myspace - Facebook

06-1-2009, 12:15 AM	#3
wickedawesomeful Carls, Girls, & Drugs Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tosh's noose. Age: 33 Posts: 3,888	Re: Feed me feedback <3 __________________ http://dozemusic.com/

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NFD FFR Player Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: I see us on a beach down in, Mexico Age: 32 Posts: 4,715	Re: Feed me feedback I liked it, what do you use. __________________

06-1-2009, 12:24 AM	#5
wickedawesomeful Carls, Girls, & Drugs Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tosh's noose. Age: 33 Posts: 3,888	Re: Feed me feedback FL Studio and Ableton Live. And thanks for the positive feedback guys, but what I really need is the negative feedback. I'd ask my mom if I just wanted to hear it was great :P What's wrong with it? __________________ http://dozemusic.com/

06-1-2009, 01:37 AM	#7
wickedawesomeful Carls, Girls, & Drugs Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tosh's noose. Age: 33 Posts: 3,888	Re: Feed me feedback What do you mean by "offbeat?" The downbeat? you're suggesting that I mm-tss-ah-tss? hahaha EDIT: new version, see first post http://www.sendspace.com/file/sxqk5y __________________ http://dozemusic.com/ Last edited by wickedawesomeful; 06-1-2009 at 10:54 AM..

06-1-2009, 10:53 AM	#9
wickedawesomeful Carls, Girls, & Drugs Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tosh's noose. Age: 33 Posts: 3,888	Re: Feed me feedback Damn, that's weird, it was working last night when I uploaded it. Let me reupload edit: fuuuck mediafire is being retarded. I've uploaded it twice and gotten that same result, and the file is DEFINITELY in my files. here's a sendspace... http://www.sendspace.com/file/sxqk5y __________________ http://dozemusic.com/

06-21-2009, 09:49 PM	#11
who_cares973 FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: :U Age: 37 Posts: 15,407	Re: Feed me feedback very nice its something id listen to more than once __________________

06-22-2009, 12:24 PM	#14
wickedawesomeful Carls, Girls, & Drugs Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tosh's noose. Age: 33 Posts: 3,888	Re: Feed me feedback ****ing threadjacker go away __________________ http://dozemusic.com/

06-22-2009, 10:54 PM	#15
Congregate FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 22	Re: Feed me feedback Thats right.

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