Aquatopia (Original Mix) WIP -- Feedback needed

[Cyanite]

Finished: http://www.tindeck.com/listen/qehv

I'm preparing an EP soon, which is going to feature a few mixes/remixes of this song. This is, I believe, the 9th mix of this song I've made so far, and this is going to be the last.

I really need criticism on this. Every single thing you guys can pick apart about this song, in any aspect, I'd really appreciate hearing and trying to fix. I've been told already that the intro is a bit long by KgZ, which I'll be working on soon.

But seriously, please let me know what you think of this, positive and negative.