New Piano Song

**Kirby615** · 10-27-2011, 01:29 AM

So my school had a snow day and I felt like writing a piano piece for my girlfriend. This is the first time I've ever written a piano solo so I really hope you enjoy!

http://soundcloud.com/thefallenrain/every-moment-i-love-you

Mr. Tinkertrain · 10-27-2011, 01:31 AM

Wow, that is absolutely amazing. Just wow.

justin_ator · 10-27-2011, 01:35 AM

There were a few things I heard that felt off to me but overall, that was a really nice listen man. VERY relaxing and you can kinda feel the emotion/atmosphere of the song.

**hi19hi19** · 10-27-2011, 02:32 AM

Quite pretty. Nothing really fancy but it sets a great atmosphere.
The quality of your recording is quite nice too.

p.s. If the beginning is cut somehow, it's super steppable :P it'd be fine with the beginning too, but a little long for what would be an easy file

Emithith · 10-27-2011, 02:40 AM

Sounds likes something from a Music Box.

**xXAll-ProXx** · 10-27-2011, 06:27 AM

your school had a snow day in October...in Colorado?

failry nice piano playing nonetheless.

Thatskier · 10-27-2011, 07:44 AM

I live in colorado to and yes certain parts got snowed out. Kirby what school you go to?

**Kirby615** · 10-27-2011, 11:34 AM

I started recording right after I thought up the main theme so it's not perfected yet, but I likely won't change it much. And I agree, it's shocking to have snow days this early. I go to University of Northern Colorado and we had a lot of power outages and tree limbs falling which merited one for us.

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Originally Posted by hi19hi19

Quite pretty. Nothing really fancy but it sets a great atmosphere.
The quality of your recording is quite nice too.

p.s. If the beginning is cut somehow, it's super steppable :P it'd be fine with the beginning too, but a little long for what would be an easy file

I can get you a cut version if you'd like to step it.

XxMidigamixX · 10-27-2011, 12:04 PM

This song is absolutely gorgeous. May I ask what's the average BPM? It seems to be less than 100 BPM, probably around 80-90 just by hearing it. It gives out a mellow feeling when I listened to it. Nice job with the song Kirby.

**rushyrulz** · 10-27-2011, 12:14 PM

I write stuff like this all the time when I'm just screwing around on the piano. Unfortunately, 98% of it never makes it to paper. Very relaxed and emotional piece, I enjoyed it

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**midnghtraver** · 10-27-2011, 10:42 PM

Whaaaaat you got a school day? No fair, Littleton didn't, what district are you in?

Also, nice piece.

EDIT: Oh, well the power went out in our school for a little while, which means they're supposed to let us go, but didn't.

Thatskier · 10-27-2011, 11:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Kirby615

I started recording right after I thought up the main theme so it's not perfected yet, but I likely won't change it much. And I agree, it's shocking to have snow days this early. I go to University of Northern Colorado and we had a lot of power outages and tree limbs falling which merited one for us.

I can get you a cut version if you'd like to step it.

Ahahaha thats funny my older brother goes there.

**Kirby615** · 10-28-2011, 12:20 AM

Thanks all for the comments guys.

The BPM is around 80, but being a piano piece it fluctuates at different parts.

Thatskier, is your brother a performance major? If so, there's a chance we've met in passing!

**Kirby615** · 10-29-2011, 06:42 PM

I agree that the melody needs some more harmonization to it, as it gets a bit repetitive as the song goes on. In the same token, I wanted it to be a very simple melody-driven piece from the beginning, so I don't want to add too much to it.

10-27-2011, 01:29 AM	#1
Kirby615 Music is my soul Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: By the Rockies, Colorado Age: 31 Posts: 284	New Piano Song So my school had a snow day and I felt like writing a piano piece for my girlfriend. This is the first time I've ever written a piano solo so I really hope you enjoy! http://soundcloud.com/thefallenrain/every-moment-i-love-you

10-27-2011, 01:31 AM	#2
Mr. Tinkertrain FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 47	Re: New Piano Song Wow, that is absolutely amazing. Just wow.

10-27-2011, 01:35 AM	#3
justin_ator 🥓<strong><span style="col Resident Overseer Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Kingsport, TN Posts: 7,648	Re: New Piano Song There were a few things I heard that felt off to me but overall, that was a really nice listen man. VERY relaxing and you can kinda feel the emotion/atmosphere of the song. __________________

10-27-2011, 02:32 AM	#4
hi19hi19 lol happy Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: DESTINY Age: 33 Posts: 12,193	Re: New Piano Song Quite pretty. Nothing really fancy but it sets a great atmosphere. The quality of your recording is quite nice too. p.s. If the beginning is cut somehow, it's super steppable :P it'd be fine with the beginning too, but a little long for what would be an easy file __________________

10-27-2011, 02:40 AM	#5
Emithith FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: London, Ontario, Maple Syrup Land Age: 28 Posts: 1,784	Re: New Piano Song Sounds likes something from a Music Box.

10-27-2011, 06:27 AM	#6
xXAll-ProXx FFR Veteran Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 2,040	Re: New Piano Song your school had a snow day in October...in Colorado? failry nice piano playing nonetheless. __________________ I have a dig bick.

10-27-2011, 12:04 PM	#9
XxMidigamixX FFR Player Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: North Cuba, FL Posts: 2,040	Re: New Piano Song This song is absolutely gorgeous. May I ask what's the average BPM? It seems to be less than 100 BPM, probably around 80-90 just by hearing it. It gives out a mellow feeling when I listened to it. Nice job with the song Kirby. __________________ Click to join!

10-27-2011, 12:14 PM	#10
rushyrulz Digital Dancing! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: 80 billion club, NE Age: 31 Posts: 12,980	Re: New Piano Song I write stuff like this all the time when I'm just screwing around on the piano. Unfortunately, 98% of it never makes it to paper. Very relaxed and emotional piece, I enjoyed it . __________________

10-27-2011, 10:42 PM	#11
midnghtraver Icarus Moth Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: NYC Age: 28 Posts: 2,064	Re: New Piano Song Whaaaaat you got a school day? No fair, Littleton didn't, what district are you in? Also, nice piece. EDIT: Oh, well the power went out in our school for a little while, which means they're supposed to let us go, but didn't.

10-28-2011, 12:20 AM	#13
Kirby615 Music is my soul Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: By the Rockies, Colorado Age: 31 Posts: 284	Re: New Piano Song Thanks all for the comments guys. The BPM is around 80, but being a piano piece it fluctuates at different parts. Thatskier, is your brother a performance major? If so, there's a chance we've met in passing!

10-29-2011, 06:42 PM	#14
Kirby615 Music is my soul Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: By the Rockies, Colorado Age: 31 Posts: 284	Re: New Piano Song I agree that the melody needs some more harmonization to it, as it gets a bit repetitive as the song goes on. In the same token, I wanted it to be a very simple melody-driven piece from the beginning, so I don't want to add too much to it.

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