01-6-2017, 06:20 AM | #201 |
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Re: Xoon Legacy Pack
if y'all need a second look at the guitar solo I can def. do that as well.
Also going to increase file submission cap to 2 files per person not including collabs. Hoping to hit 20 files soonish.
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01-6-2017, 11:51 AM | #202 |
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Re: Xoon Legacy Pack
Sent another file
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01-6-2017, 12:04 PM | #203 |
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-man you always step the weirdest shit lmao. As is I can't accept it, it drags on too much during the main sections and repeats needlessly, rhythms are just repeated over and over. Lots of patterns are awkwardly cluttered and need a bit of clean up. With a cut and a few fixes this would be coul to include though.
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Also, ya need someone to delve deep into the music stuff :U
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01-6-2017, 12:15 PM | #205 |
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also sent a thing
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01-6-2017, 12:34 PM | #206 | |
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Yggdrasil -This is good yes. Lots of really cool parts, beginning is a little mine heavy but that might be a bit subjective to my tastes. Only complaint otherwise, similar to your last submission, some holds are sustained a little too long at times (or perhaps too frequent) that kinda forces a weird flow to the file. It's not a huge deal though. Heart Gear -Clean up the 32nd patterns (make them a little more consistent throughout the file too) and shorten the holds at the holdstream section (it's insane with the 32nds mixed in lmao). Rest is good. also would anyone want to test my file? I'd like some outer critics
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01-6-2017, 01:32 PM | #207 |
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Will do that Chris. I was debating on substituting the 32nds with 24ths on the 12ths section, is that fine?
Edit: I also realized that the first half of the holdstream are still 12ths lmfao rip me. I fixed that part, will probably change the 32nds on the beginning 12ths to 24ths edit: sent fixes
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01-6-2017, 01:57 PM | #208 |
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Re: Xoon Legacy Pack (Submissions Close on Feb. 1st)
i sent a file to the pack, hope it's accepted
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I can look at your file chris if you want. Just PM it to me.
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01-6-2017, 04:17 PM | #210 |
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Re: Xoon Legacy Pack (Submissions Close on Feb. 1st)
yggdrasil looks godlike (i think kommi wanted 800x600 for bgs)
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01-6-2017, 06:01 PM | #211 |
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Re: Xoon Legacy Pack (Submissions Close on Feb. 1st)
bgs i'm not super worried about, banners I wanted conformity at 512x168
Jashin no konrei -You have a good understanding of making files, and I can definitely see this making it in eventually. Here's what I'd like you to work on for this file. 1. The file is far too difficult during the jumpstream sections. The rest of the file is particularly tame and easy compared to these sections. Just 16th streams with -some- jumps accentuating particular hits would suffice. 2. You're faithfully following the snare drum 8th jumps, but this becomes incredibly stale and boring while there's all kinds of cool guitar stuff going on in the back. I'd encourage you to re-write these sections following the guitar and its accentuations.
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01-6-2017, 08:34 PM | #212 |
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those gfx look fckin amazing
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01-6-2017, 10:57 PM | #213 |
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Oh hey Heart Gear actually made it in lmfao. I sure have somewhat improved over the years :^)
Edit: Also, I can take a look at them Kommi
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01-7-2017, 08:07 AM | #214 |
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Re: Xoon Legacy Pack (Submissions Close on Feb. 1st)
i can remove/alter the big blue blocks if it's too hard on your eyes
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01-7-2017, 12:59 PM | #215 |
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That set is neat c:
Also, might send my party since Movez is dead unless Rog does a surprise release :/
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01-7-2017, 01:29 PM | #216 |
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I don't think Movez is confirmed dead, is it?
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01-7-2017, 01:31 PM | #217 |
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Re: Xoon Legacy Pack (Submissions Close on Feb. 1st)
i also have that "tiger stole my family" file never released but intended for ckmp1.5 i could send here. not too crazy about it but if i changed it up a lot and made it cool i'll send it.
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01-7-2017, 02:21 PM | #218 |
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probably is. Though that's for another thread. I still have the files that are accepted but idk what to do with them at this point
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01-7-2017, 03:11 PM | #219 |
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i spoke to rog recently
said it wasn't dead yet but was rly busy. I wouldn't quite give up on that pack yet tbh.
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01-7-2017, 03:19 PM | #220 |
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remember vgmp4 came back from the dead
twice
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