Lofty Dump MiniPack 3 OPEN SUBMISSION

[lofty rhino]

Klaius

[Can You Interpret]

Very comforting first submission. Song choice is great. Catchy chorus--I am sure that this file will get a lot of play just from those things alone. Overall you clearly payed close attention to patterning. I like the frequent use of the stop jack (single note to jump), and the friendly rolly/staircase patterns. Also, good use of color offset in places like *41.436

I think that some of these mines are really messing with the ability for this to be fun on rates. A lot of times you are doing them on top of other things that highlight the effect of the music anyway(see 49.368). You already offset. You don't need mines as well. Same goes for the beginning three mine jack--you have holds to represent that sound. The only mines that I see as being truly effective are the ones at 18.706-20.030. This is accepted as long as you take out the other mines.

Great submission!