Stepping Stones 2 [Submissions CLOSED]

[Kraezymann]

@DDRNGGin - much much better! However the mine placement is in the wrong 4th note spot, but I think that is due to a communication error on my part; not being as specific as I should have been. Is it okay if I just change them? As for Ignis Fatuus, it's also much much better. There are a couple jumps missing during the "call and answer" bit, so I might add them in to fix it up. Otherwise the only thing I'm worried about is that 16th trill at b156. I think that would work better as a spread pattern than an index pattern. It would be easier to hit, and (IMO) more fun to do. What do you think?

I have also removed BBB and replaced them with your two new ones

@.Rarity - It's absolutely a good attempt, but the problems though few, are a bit too heavy for me to include it. The BPM should be 147 even, and your offset was too late. Because of where you have them, it's causing all sorts of problems with the charts. For instance, during the "eurobeat" sounding synth lines (those small 16th runs), at the beginning you're fairly on target; but on the same part at the end, you are off by a whole 16th. During the singing that starts at b44 (on SM5) you have the triplets starting on a 16th, and while it might have sounded right, because the BPM is off, it does eventually drift. They should technically start on the 8th earlier.

And that part is way too repetitive - Your pattern usage for rest of the file is actually pretty good, but you have those 16th triplets for just about 24 seconds, and that's almost a third of the file! I know it's not 100% you though, the song is a poor cut (and of not so good quality, but neither of which are your fault). So while it was a good attempt, I'm going to have to reject it because the problems are just too overwhelming.