Yolomania 3 Graphics Help Please!

[~Zero~]

Originally Posted by rCaliberGX

artist for I Burn should be "Jeff Williams feat. Casey Lee Williams"

Blame Wafles if its incorrect, I just go based off what the website states. If we want to be really accurate I guess it should be "Jeff Williams Feat. Casey Lee Williams & Lamar Hall"

[rCaliberGX]

yup, i think wafles just used the info i put in for my RWBY files in yolomania 2 (which was incorrect)

[~Zero~]

fixed with artist (didnt add Lamar Hall, because i am such a bad guy lol)

[Oni-Paranoia]

Shedding off some PS rust. Not particularly happy with artist placement or the use of crosshatching or the background. Placeholder basically.

Edit: Would be grand if I got the title correct (-1 for being side-tracked).

[~Zero~]

redid these because I hated my other set, Baby I is next

[Wafles]

Site & OP updated

You guys are awesome <3<3<3

Gonna try and get a few sets today but I'm trying to finish a really long file today so it depends on how long that takes

[Zephei]

[Wafles]

dayum zephei

looks sick

[Gundam-Dude]

The letterforms are so similar that I see only "DDD" or "JJJ" with even "OOO" if I squint and/or blur my vision. And I won't bother ranting on about consistency in letterforms when you warped everything intentionally but to keep it short and sweet, it doesn't look aesthetically pleasing (frankly it just looks like bad graffiti done by a middle school kid, no offense) and the legibility and readability is really fucked up. I do understand if your objective was to make something mildly chaotic to match the song, but there are other alternatives and better ways to do this.

Also consider changing the typeface for "terminal 11" because I can't even begin to make sense of why the numerals are the exact same letterforms as the lowercase "i". It's just overall a poorly designed typeface, rofl.

Just my opinions, take it with a pinch of salt. If it's completely okay with Wafles and co. then there's no need to give a shit about what the font police has to say.

[Zephei]

Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

The letterforms are so similar that I see only "DDD" or "JJJ" with even "OOO" if I squint and/or blur my vision. And I won't bother ranting on about consistency in letterforms when you warped everything intentionally but to keep it short and sweet, it doesn't look aesthetically pleasing (frankly it just looks like bad graffiti done by a middle school kid, no offense) and the legibility and readability is really fucked up. I do understand if your objective was to make something mildly chaotic to match the song, but there are other alternatives and better ways to do this.

Also consider changing the typeface for "terminal 11" because I can't even begin to make sense of why the numerals are the exact same letterforms as the lowercase "i". It's just overall a poorly designed typeface, rofl.

Just my opinions, take it with a pinch of salt. If it's completely okay with Wafles and co. then there's no need to give a shit about what the font police has to say.

Yeah, I didn't really consider legibility when I chose the typeface. I'll redo it if other people have trouble making out the text.

[~Zero~]

I think this is alright, the banner might be a bit of an eyesore.




made a re-color (which is less of an eyesore imo)




part 3, one very minor thing bothered me a lot

[Wafles]

Diggin' the second set. I was kinda clueless on what to do for that song so I'm glad you grabbed it haha.

[Wafles]

Originally Posted by Zephei

Yeah, I didn't really consider legibility when I chose the typeface. I'll redo it if other people have trouble making out the text.

I think the only hard letter to make out is the O

I still think it looks sweet as is but GD's points are valid


edit- its a moot point anyway because choof just pulled odd22 from the pack and didn't care for the set

[Oni-Paranoia]

Some more. Further shaking off the rust and a lot of discussions with ~Zero~.

[Wafles]

Originally Posted by Oni-Paranoia

Some more. Further shaking off the rust and a lot of discussions with ~Zero~.

This doesn't really match the song at all IMO
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=laCqxpQRGt4

Song is really cutesy/speedy/fun, your set is kinda dark/cold IMO


Edit: HOWEVER, the background/text could work really well for Moonearth [DJ Sharpnel]
DJ Sharpnel Logo: http://i1130.photobucket.com/albums/...djsharpnel.png

[Oni-Paranoia]

Originally Posted by Wafles

Song is really cutesy/speedy/fun, your set is kinda dark/cold IMO

True. I don't always use the song as a reference though (which in this case is a bad thing.)

Anyhow, if you feel it's better for Moonearth, I'll just change the text and/or color.

[Wafles]

Go for moonearth with it IMO
color's probably fine but use the song as a reference I guess, up to you

[Wafles]

Made a set

source image looked dumb in 800x600 so this one got a 720 set

[Oni-Paranoia]

Switched. Text on the BG feels high, but I believe it looked worse low; picking poisons.

[~Zero~]