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Woof
![]() Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: MA
Posts: 173
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![]() I started this song back in December and kinda forgot about it until a couple days ago. I was hoping to get some tips/ feedback from the community here on how I could improve. I could put it on my Soundcloud, but I'm a little more strict with what I put on there (besides my pizza rap for FFR lol).
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/519264 |
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FFR Veteran
![]() Join Date: Jun 2012
Age: 28
Posts: 2,893
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![]() I hear some guitar over it
Would be a very nice analog piece |
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FFR Player
Join Date: Sep 2011
Posts: 164
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![]() I REALLY REALLY like the synth work and choice around the 55 second mark. I don't really have anything to say about the composition itself but maybe the drum work was a bit on the soft side for me. It seems to get engulfed by the powerful bass synth on my speakers
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