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FFR R^3 Hokage
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: Ontario, Canada
Age: 24
Posts: 2,173
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I'm serious.
On a side note, new track. I know there's obvious issues with this, since it's a Herogayshit song, and I ran out of creative ideas, (I'll add that I'm looking for collaboration as well on this) but so far it's okay as a normal beat. I can't do dubstep or pseudostep for a god given shit. http://soundcloud.com/thezeitgeistproject/make-a-difference
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FFR Player
Join Date: Sep 2011
Posts: 164
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It's a bit rough on the ears when you have all your ideas coming into play towards the end up the track but there's definitely potential in this! I like your arps in the intro but the progress needs to be a bit more than just going from C to A#. Diversity, mix it up a bit!
Keep it up!
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500+250+50-300-15+1000+rs
Join Date: Dec 2007
Age: 31
Posts: 243
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What program are you using?
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Vophie
Join Date: Nov 2007
Age: 27
Posts: 1,952
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It is... rough. But it is also a start~
Just work on your progressions more. (As in, just play with a piano, or with your program keyboard) Playing for fun helps tons. Also, out of this whole composition, the most interesting part starts at 2:16 to the end. I love it. I would use that in the beginning of a new piece, or even this one, and then reconstruct it over. One more thing, if I were you asking for 'help', then I wouldn't worry about my production to much. I would focus on the notes, unique sounds(ex: 2:16 to the end), and neat rhythms or motifs. |
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