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Old 12-13-2011, 06:53 PM   #1
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Default Worked on a short song, feedback plz ^^

It's this fake guitar-ish song I worked on about a year ago. Never really did much with it.

http://www.4shared.com/audio/7HqE_M9...ng_title.html?
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Old 12-13-2011, 07:00 PM   #2
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wow that was great
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Old 12-13-2011, 07:02 PM   #3
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Default Re: Worked on a short song, feedback plz ^^

SICK DUDE! I like it.
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Old 12-13-2011, 10:20 PM   #4
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Default Re: Worked on a short song, feedback plz ^^

Sounds like virt meets SSH

sexy song

Only suggestion maybe make the drums sound a little less muddy and more crisp? Not a biggie though.
They seem to be somewhat burried under the mix, with an exception to the tomtom (I believe thats what they are) solos.

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Old 12-15-2011, 09:45 AM   #5
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Default Re: Worked on a short song, feedback plz ^^

WOW! good job! i love the bass line! it somehow reminds me of a game
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Old 12-16-2011, 01:32 PM   #6
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Default Re: Worked on a short song, feedback plz ^^

Yeppers, very cool! I really like it, love that jazzy, rockish, video-game vibe. Love the melody and the chords.

I agree thought that something about the drums is...off. I think maybe they just need to be louder, because I think I really like their timbre. They definitely should be more poignant during their 'solos' near the end. Perhaps the slightest tempo slow-down would do the trick.

Maybe it's just the metal guitar that sounds like it was taken from Doom that I don't like though, because I know if I were making this song, I wouldn't be happy with that instrument sounding like it does in there. Maybe the drums are acting like a bridge or something between that metal feel and the super-synth melody instruments, and so it ends up being them that sound 'off'.
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Old 12-16-2011, 02:06 PM   #7
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The synths are so cool. Maybe you cool experiment with the riffs and drums and bass to balance their sounds, but you just achieved musical perfection with those synths. :')
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