Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open - Page 23

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-14-2009, 03:16 PM

(Ninzaburo) Babylon
Column 1 Bass on singles is weird and doesn't feel right. As Moches' mentioned in his review, there's a difficulty inconsistency. Holds were all pretty random. Rejected

(Ninzaburo) End Time
Good song but still this file does not do justice. Noticed that column 1 bass again which bothers me (even if it is just one section). Didn't like your mine usage at all. Layering is all over the place. Rejected

(Cyrenics) Ska de Chocobo!!
A lot of your hand usage is too intense. Jumps with mini-freezes would fit better. There's inconsistency with your hold usages. Semi-climax theory at the end which was pretty OK. Found this too repetitive and generic to warrant an accept. Rejected

(Moches) Night
Typical Moches file. Well structured however it's too generic and drags on for me so I can't say yes to this. The only thing I found interesting were the BPM gimmicks near the end other than that this file doesn't offer much. Rejected

(Samurai7694) Classic 4 Pop'n Music
Hands are too intense for the song. Better to leave them as jumps. This is actually pretty well structured and layered however I wouldn't warrant this pack worthy because it doesn't offer much. Would be a good file for some other pack but not for Xoon 5. Rejected

(trumaestro) King Dedede Battle
Short and straightforward however not pack worthy. Would be a good file for some other pack but not for Xoon 5. Rejected

(Ferrari) Red Hot Skull
Well structured. Enjoyable and unique chill file. As Moches mentioned, there's some minor freeze abuse with the mini-freezes. Accepted.

(Scylaax) DEMY
You step too much t+pazolite, rofl. I quit out of this due to the dumpy patterns and how generic this was. Rejected

(Scylaax) Fire Leo Syrinx
As Moches mentioned, there's layering errors and inconsistencies. Not bad but needs work. Rejected.

(Scylaax) Metal Squad
Cool metal arrange. Well structured and layered. Only small complaint is the percussion layering when you transition from that to the guitar solo and then back again. It doesn't really feel right. Nonetheless, I'll pass this. Accepted.

(Sargon) Remember
There are some errors/inconsistencies with jump and hand layering which confused me in a bunch of spots because it's all over the place. The mini-freezes that layer the higher pitched piano bugged me (I did the same thing in my Colors of Sorrow file and that didn't turn out well). Overall layering and structure is good and the song is cool. I could see this getting into the pack with some fixes. Rejected for the time being.

**kommisar** · 11-14-2009, 07:00 PM

demy: this isn't fun at all. sure it may be technically impressive but. yeah. reject

syrinx: i feel like i'm playing the same rhythm over and over. stream with rainbow notes come in, quit out. reject

king dedede battle: shoulda been in kirby pack 2. file is good, but this pack is a little more high tier. file is also piss easy till the end haha. reject

metal squid: way to use your original metal squad gfx lmao. file drags on a bit with the 8th note parts but you respected the solo theory. file's p.coul. light accep

remember: as a 1-2 on dcp scale, this was fantastic. very chill file. accep

red hot skull: auto accep

night: found this pretty boring tbh. easy and nothing really thrilling. sry mate. reject

Kraezymann · 11-14-2009, 07:11 PM

good idea to restep pfx' We Gotz Game y/n?

xferrarix · 11-14-2009, 08:04 PM

so today i realized how steppable the sonic adventure ost is

i might step one more song from it.. i want at least three files in this pack so i have more out there since my released sim library is incredibly small

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-14-2009, 08:38 PM

I just finished a new file.

Gonna make graphics, do some last minute checks and send it in. It's pretty fun

ninzaburo · 11-14-2009, 08:46 PM

　_, ._
（；ﾟ Дﾟ）

**kommisar** · 11-14-2009, 09:13 PM

ryan if you step sky deck we're collabing

icontrolyourworld · 11-14-2009, 09:55 PM

Aight I fixed everything up, there's just one thing ya need to know

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

- Measure 20, the [34] jumps can be hands or jumps with mini-freezes. There's an inconsistency with how you layered because the first two are mini-rolls while the other two are 32nd jacks. I don't know what you were trying to do there. Also why is the first set of mini-rolls 32nds while the second set 48ths? It's the exact same sound being played.

In Ddreamstudio it looked right, i'll have a look again though.
E: yep it's right.
Evidence: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0iCjCc-yT4Q

Vocaloid-Dude · 11-14-2009, 10:19 PM

fair enough

**Coolboyrulez0** · 11-14-2009, 10:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kraezymann

good idea to restep pfx' We Gotz Game y/n?

I'd like a to see a nice restep of it, give it a try

moches · 11-14-2009, 10:41 PM

It's cool, guys, haha. Not even I really expected Night to get in

anyway I'll try to step something else for this. if anybody has requests they can PM me. I'm out of songs...again. oh boy.

**Coolboyrulez0** · 11-14-2009, 10:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by moches

It's cool, guys, haha. Not even I really expected Night to get in

anyway I'll try to step something else for this. if anybody has requests they can PM me. I'm out of songs...again. oh boy.

What type of music are you interested in stepping?

I got 18k songs on my HD so there's gotta be something for you ;P

moches · 11-14-2009, 10:53 PM

Well, let's see: uh, I've stepped every possible steppable song on moonshine, so if you can find any other good Serenade songs, that would be nice. Everything kors k makes is gold. If you know any songs by paraoka/Yust, I'd like to see those. I'm also really interested in stepping chiptune (Night is actually by Phlogiston, hehe) these days, so I'd be grateful if you hooked me up.

Thanks for your help. If you want, I can PM you my (unreleased) file for Night.

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-14-2009, 10:56 PM

Step SHE Music and I will love you forever.

I'm half serious about this

Kraezymann · 11-14-2009, 10:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Coolboyrulez0

I'd like a to see a nice restep of it, give it a try

Okay I will. I dunno if Interrupt Vector is a good music choice for this pack but its the quality of the file that counts right?

Holy crap I have always wanted to restep We Gotz Game and someone actually wants to see if I can

awesome

**Coolboyrulez0** · 11-14-2009, 11:07 PM

Pack of ten Steppable songs uploading right now. Everything from Kors K (techno/trance), Serenade (instrumental rock) & Phlogiston (chiptune) to DJ Plague. (hardcore)

oh and a nelly "gettin hot in here" chiptune remix by virt
**** yes

**Coolboyrulez0** · 11-14-2009, 11:37 PM

done

http://www.mediafire.com/?met1a4oj0yc

go wild

moches · 11-14-2009, 11:43 PM

Wank hoo.

Your reward will be PM'ed to you soon.

**kommisar** · 11-15-2009, 06:38 AM

if you step SHE i will be 60% stricter

moches · 11-15-2009, 09:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kommisar

if you step SHE i will be 60% stricter

there's always vocaloid, I guess.

11-14-2009, 03:16 PM	#441
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open (Ninzaburo) Babylon Column 1 Bass on singles is weird and doesn't feel right. As Moches' mentioned in his review, there's a difficulty inconsistency. Holds were all pretty random. Rejected (Ninzaburo) End Time Good song but still this file does not do justice. Noticed that column 1 bass again which bothers me (even if it is just one section). Didn't like your mine usage at all. Layering is all over the place. Rejected (Cyrenics) Ska de Chocobo!! A lot of your hand usage is too intense. Jumps with mini-freezes would fit better. There's inconsistency with your hold usages. Semi-climax theory at the end which was pretty OK. Found this too repetitive and generic to warrant an accept. Rejected (Moches) Night Typical Moches file. Well structured however it's too generic and drags on for me so I can't say yes to this. The only thing I found interesting were the BPM gimmicks near the end other than that this file doesn't offer much. Rejected (Samurai7694) Classic 4 Pop'n Music Hands are too intense for the song. Better to leave them as jumps. This is actually pretty well structured and layered however I wouldn't warrant this pack worthy because it doesn't offer much. Would be a good file for some other pack but not for Xoon 5. Rejected (trumaestro) King Dedede Battle Short and straightforward however not pack worthy. Would be a good file for some other pack but not for Xoon 5. Rejected (Ferrari) Red Hot Skull Well structured. Enjoyable and unique chill file. As Moches mentioned, there's some minor freeze abuse with the mini-freezes. Accepted. (Scylaax) DEMY You step too much t+pazolite, rofl. I quit out of this due to the dumpy patterns and how generic this was. Rejected (Scylaax) Fire Leo Syrinx As Moches mentioned, there's layering errors and inconsistencies. Not bad but needs work. Rejected. (Scylaax) Metal Squad Cool metal arrange. Well structured and layered. Only small complaint is the percussion layering when you transition from that to the guitar solo and then back again. It doesn't really feel right. Nonetheless, I'll pass this. Accepted. (Sargon) Remember There are some errors/inconsistencies with jump and hand layering which confused me in a bunch of spots because it's all over the place. The mini-freezes that layer the higher pitched piano bugged me (I did the same thing in my Colors of Sorrow file and that didn't turn out well). Overall layering and structure is good and the song is cool. I could see this getting into the pack with some fixes. Rejected for the time being. __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key) Last edited by Gundam-Dude; 11-14-2009 at 03:20 PM..

11-14-2009, 07:00 PM	#442
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 35 Posts: 7,324	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open demy: this isn't fun at all. sure it may be technically impressive but. yeah. reject syrinx: i feel like i'm playing the same rhythm over and over. stream with rainbow notes come in, quit out. reject king dedede battle: shoulda been in kirby pack 2. file is good, but this pack is a little more high tier. file is also piss easy till the end haha. reject metal squid: way to use your original metal squad gfx lmao. file drags on a bit with the 8th note parts but you respected the solo theory. file's p.coul. light accep remember: as a 1-2 on dcp scale, this was fantastic. very chill file. accep red hot skull: auto accep night: found this pretty boring tbh. easy and nothing really thrilling. sry mate. reject

11-14-2009, 07:11 PM	#443
Kraezymann Forum User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Saskatchewan, Canada Age: 37 Posts: 1,640	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open good idea to restep pfx' We Gotz Game y/n? __________________ Twitch \| Stepping Stones 2! \| Stepping Stones 3! \| Stepping Stones 4! Submit to this - Last edited by Kraezymann; 11-14-2009 at 08:05 PM..

11-14-2009, 08:04 PM	#444
xferrarix FFR Player Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Spring Hill Age: 33 Posts: 1,091	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open so today i realized how steppable the sonic adventure ost is i might step one more song from it.. i want at least three files in this pack so i have more out there since my released sim library is incredibly small

11-14-2009, 08:38 PM	#445
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open I just finished a new file. Gonna make graphics, do some last minute checks and send it in. It's pretty fun __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key)

11-14-2009, 08:46 PM	#446
ninzaburo FFR Player Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Japan Posts: 48	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open 　_, ._ （；ﾟ Дﾟ） __________________ 一期一会

11-14-2009, 09:13 PM	#447
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 35 Posts: 7,324	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open ryan if you step sky deck we're collabing

11-14-2009, 10:19 PM	#449
Vocaloid-Dude FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2009 Age: 34 Posts: 5	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open fair enough

11-14-2009, 10:41 PM	#451
moches FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 30 Posts: 3,996	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open It's cool, guys, haha. Not even I really expected Night to get in anyway I'll try to step something else for this. if anybody has requests they can PM me. I'm out of songs...again. oh boy.

11-14-2009, 10:53 PM	#453
moches FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 30 Posts: 3,996	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Well, let's see: uh, I've stepped every possible steppable song on moonshine, so if you can find any other good Serenade songs, that would be nice. Everything kors k makes is gold. If you know any songs by paraoka/Yust, I'd like to see those. I'm also really interested in stepping chiptune (Night is actually by Phlogiston, hehe) these days, so I'd be grateful if you hooked me up. Thanks for your help. If you want, I can PM you my (unreleased) file for Night.

11-14-2009, 10:56 PM	#454
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Step SHE Music and I will love you forever. I'm half serious about this __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key)

11-14-2009, 11:07 PM	#456
Coolboyrulez0 VICES Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Germany Age: 32 Posts: 10,042	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Pack of ten Steppable songs uploading right now. Everything from Kors K (techno/trance), Serenade (instrumental rock) & Phlogiston (chiptune) to DJ Plague. (hardcore) oh and a nelly "gettin hot in here" chiptune remix by virt **** yes __________________ https://soundcloud.com/cbrbreakcore https://cbrrecords.bandcamp.com/ Last edited by Coolboyrulez0; 11-14-2009 at 11:10 PM..

11-14-2009, 11:37 PM	#457
Coolboyrulez0 VICES Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Germany Age: 32 Posts: 10,042	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open done http://www.mediafire.com/?met1a4oj0yc go wild __________________ https://soundcloud.com/cbrbreakcore https://cbrrecords.bandcamp.com/

11-14-2009, 11:43 PM	#458
moches FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 30 Posts: 3,996	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Wank hoo. Your reward will be PM'ed to you soon.

11-15-2009, 06:38 AM	#459
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 35 Posts: 7,324	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open if you step SHE i will be 60% stricter

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