Kysora - Story [Uplifting Trance WIP] -- Need feedback

[Cyanite]

http://soundcloud.com/kysora/story-3

I think I'm getting better at this music business

I haven't written a B section for this song yet so I'm leaving it at this for now, but I want to get some feedback on what's there before I continue with it. I'm doing some pretty new stuff with trance lately, this song is the first song I've made with a tempo change during the build-up (it's subtle, but there). I'm also trying to go for a slightly more stripped down sound than I usually use, just to keep the songs sounding cleaner at the expense of a few bass patches and background pads. Just want to make sure this all works before I continue with it.

[Pyroshock]

I really like how the lead synth goes when the bass changes pitch. Overall sounds good. I think everything still kinda mushes together a bit and isn't as clean as it could potentially be. Also I think it sounds too wide, but that may just be my preference. Tempo change sounded natural, so that's good.

Hope you finish it. I haven't finished anything in ages.