XOON 4 submissions open - Page 37

**dood gone krazee** · 09-12-2009, 11:25 PM

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Originally Posted by Rin-Dude

send ya stuff before its too late. you have less than a week left and i still havent gotten any dgk submissions

mike hurry da fuc up step somethin

Half done with Anti The Holic and a day of nothing tomorrow, don't worry they're coming. 8)

**WTFBrandon** · 09-12-2009, 11:31 PM

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Originally Posted by Rin-Dude

but ya not judgin for da pack =<

ver tru ver tru.
still, im planning on doing Vanishment of Hatsune Miku if you guise dun hurry up! D;<

**dood gone krazee** · 09-13-2009, 12:31 AM

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Originally Posted by WTFBrandon

ver tru ver tru.
still, im planning on doing Vanishment of Hatsune Miku if you guise dun hurry up! D;<

Lmfao I was going to do that one too. Not for this pack though, a future Xoon.

Kommi why the **** did you change your username

**Gundam-Dude** · 09-13-2009, 12:43 AM

I already did that song but it's unreleased because it's not that good

Wineandbread · 09-13-2009, 01:31 AM

Last minute submission (take 2) sent

It's better than my last one imo

**dood gone krazee** · 09-13-2009, 02:13 AM

I've gotten feedback on my file so far and have decided to make two charts.

One that is layered and fits the song appropriately.
And one that is layered even more, representing the song less, but therefore giving difficulty since most people want hard files. :\
Might finish tomorrow. Still have until the 18th to submit though.

**Gundam-Dude** · 09-13-2009, 02:18 AM

(Scylaax) Acid Vision
Measures 58-62 are pretty inconsistent with the rest of the file. Straightforward and technical MA file. Only thing that irked me are the missing stops/BPM Gimmicks. Lightly Accepted.

(OperationStrawbarry) Biometrics Warrior HD Test
Dumpload of inconsistencies. Generic and found no replay value in this. Rejected.

(Ophi) Horatio
Technically perfect but I didn't find much replay value in this (actually found this to be pretty generic). There was a lack of rainbow note theory as well which would've spiced up the chart and made it infinitely better. Rejected.

(Ophi) Necrofantasia
You hit my soft spot for Touhou metal files. After Measure 92, there are a bunch of missing hand placements which are inconsistent with the rest of the file. Pretty much an easier version of Nick's chart but a bit overlayered and underlayered in sections. Maybe/Pending until I hear from moches or TranceCore.

(Scylaax) Nothing Beats
Nice Jack theory. Solo was pretty cool too. Accepted

(Ophi) Phantom Ensemble
More Touhou metal oh god yes. Cool file. Only complaint is that from Measure 46-57 or so your steps weren't very song relevant and seemed randomly placed at times. Accepted

(Wineandbread) Poquito Mas
Freezes for the hands near the end weren't necessarily needed. File is rather short and there wasn't anything notable in this that would make me replay this. Decent file and all but not enough to warrant an accept from me at this point. Rejected

(CBR) Rawest Forest
Very FFR-esque but pretty much see Kommi's notes on your file. Rejected.

(Ophi) Tewi Within
Touhou metal orgasm. You sure love one-handed trills. Alright file overall though it is underlayered during sections. Think I like Scylaax's version more despite your file being shorter and straightforward so Rejected.

(Ophi) The Flameout
Too short of a file. Straightforward but I found no replay value in this. There was absolutely nothing notable in this chart that would warrant an accept from me so Rejected.

(Scylaax) Tick
Haha didn't realize this was a Touhou remix until it finally built up. For a short file, there wasn't anything notable in this that stood out. Didn't find very much replay value in this either and it was lacking some rainbow theory. Rejected

moches · 09-13-2009, 02:50 AM

(Scylaax) Acid Vision
See Gundam's notes. Solid file with a bit of replay value. Accepted.

(Ophi) Horatio
Patterns in this are annoying as hell (oh gee, trills....) Agree with Gundam, file seems generic and sort of been there, done that. I dunno if color notes will make it much better. Bad song choice. Rejected.

(Ophi) Necrofantasia
Okay, Gundam has basically done all my work for me with his review. He hit it pretty much nail on. I'm honestly torn about this file so Maybe/Pending until I hear from TranceCore.

(Scylaax) Nothing Beats
Pretty good jack theory. Hands seem overused at times. The beginning of the solo isn't straight 16ths, listen a bit more carefully. Regardless, Accepted

(Ophi) Phantom Ensemble
Good file overall that could be fixed up to be a bit more relevant (pitch relevancy in the solo could have been better, overall hand abuse.) Maybe/Pending

(Wineandbread) Poquito Mas
Surprisingly decent. Freezes at the end were not needed. 48th trills are also insane compared to the rest of the file. Fix that and I'd accept. Maybe/Pending

(CBR) Rawest Forest
See Kommisar's notes. He nailed it. Maybe/Pending

(Ophi) The Flameout
Wow either I'm lazy as hell today or Gundam's doing a really good job. Probably both hahaa. File isn't anything special sorry dude :sad face: Rejected.

(Scylaax) Tick
Okay this wasn't a short file hehe. Not a bad file but lacks a bit of zest for me as well as feeling rather unpolished. Not that it's not well made, but it's a bit of a toughie to read. Maybe/Pending

Rin-Dude · 09-13-2009, 07:21 AM

acid vision: repetitive, but well made and makes a fun MA file. accep

horatio: technically correct, but not a huge fan of the whole file being guitar trills with jumpstream. rejec

necrofantasia: you sure like one handed trills lmao. found this one fun despite being a tad overlayered. accep

nothing beats: just when i thought people forgot about jack theory. this one wins my heart. accep

phantom ensemble: very fun file. solo kinda reminded me of my tigre bianca for some reason lmao. accep

rawest forest: file does have fun value i wont deny that. has a very ffr-esque feel to it. change the 32nd trills and that jump jack leading to a jack on the same note, alternate them so that the jumps are on [12] and the single note jack lands on 3 or 4 at least so its not aids to hit. neds fixin

the flameout: AAA'd if that means anything. song feels rather short and repetitive, dont think i see myself accepting this one.

Tick: not too sure about this one. had fun parts, had boring parts etc. ill wait for other judges before making a final judgment

**Patashu** · 09-13-2009, 08:19 AM

lazily submitted to make the end of battle

started neu lol

stargroup · 09-13-2009, 10:15 AM

WHY DO YOU GUYS RESTEP EVERYTHING

there is a necrofantasia file in dcp already, so what makes you guys think it's a good idea to restep it

Wineandbread · 09-13-2009, 10:27 AM

Who's Ophi?

By freezes at the end, do you mean starting at 1:31 or the very last verse?
As for the trills.. guess I could just make them bursts.

**Mollocephalus** · 09-13-2009, 10:49 AM

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xferrarix · 09-13-2009, 10:49 AM

i'm submitting chrome gadget v2 just for the heck of it, dunno if u guys will like it or not.

edit: pretty much its got jack theory, fun as before, with some freezes and triples added in. along with small fixes i didn't notice before.

Rin-Dude · 09-13-2009, 10:50 AM

maybe

necrofantasia is not the same song......ps ophi is an otakus drem guy

instead of chrome gadge why dont you step my 8bit mix of it thats obv way better

and necros hurry and submit =x

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Rin-Dude · 09-13-2009, 11:07 AM

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xferrarix · 09-13-2009, 11:17 AM

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Rin-Dude · 09-13-2009, 11:38 AM

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**Coolboyrulez0** · 09-13-2009, 12:05 PM

made rawest less aids and also added some missing 16ths

Should be good now.

also, IF i have time to finish I will submit my m1dy file hehe (don't hate on the song choice)

09-13-2009, 12:43 AM	#724
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: XOON 4 submissions open I already did that song but it's unreleased because it's not that good __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key)

09-13-2009, 02:18 AM	#727
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: XOON 4 submissions open (Scylaax) Acid Vision Measures 58-62 are pretty inconsistent with the rest of the file. Straightforward and technical MA file. Only thing that irked me are the missing stops/BPM Gimmicks. Lightly Accepted. (OperationStrawbarry) Biometrics Warrior HD Test Dumpload of inconsistencies. Generic and found no replay value in this. Rejected. (Ophi) Horatio Technically perfect but I didn't find much replay value in this (actually found this to be pretty generic). There was a lack of rainbow note theory as well which would've spiced up the chart and made it infinitely better. Rejected. (Ophi) Necrofantasia You hit my soft spot for Touhou metal files. After Measure 92, there are a bunch of missing hand placements which are inconsistent with the rest of the file. Pretty much an easier version of Nick's chart but a bit overlayered and underlayered in sections. Maybe/Pending until I hear from moches or TranceCore. (Scylaax) Nothing Beats Nice Jack theory. Solo was pretty cool too. Accepted (Ophi) Phantom Ensemble More Touhou metal oh god yes. Cool file. Only complaint is that from Measure 46-57 or so your steps weren't very song relevant and seemed randomly placed at times. Accepted (Wineandbread) Poquito Mas Freezes for the hands near the end weren't necessarily needed. File is rather short and there wasn't anything notable in this that would make me replay this. Decent file and all but not enough to warrant an accept from me at this point. Rejected (CBR) Rawest Forest Very FFR-esque but pretty much see Kommi's notes on your file. Rejected. (Ophi) Tewi Within Touhou metal orgasm. You sure love one-handed trills. Alright file overall though it is underlayered during sections. Think I like Scylaax's version more despite your file being shorter and straightforward so Rejected. (Ophi) The Flameout Too short of a file. Straightforward but I found no replay value in this. There was absolutely nothing notable in this chart that would warrant an accept from me so Rejected. (Scylaax) Tick Haha didn't realize this was a Touhou remix until it finally built up. For a short file, there wasn't anything notable in this that stood out. Didn't find very much replay value in this either and it was lacking some rainbow theory. Rejected __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key) Last edited by Gundam-Dude; 09-13-2009 at 02:22 AM..

09-13-2009, 02:50 AM	#728
moches FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 30 Posts: 3,996	Re: XOON 4 submissions open (Scylaax) Acid Vision See Gundam's notes. Solid file with a bit of replay value. Accepted. (Ophi) Horatio Patterns in this are annoying as hell (oh gee, trills....) Agree with Gundam, file seems generic and sort of been there, done that. I dunno if color notes will make it much better. Bad song choice. Rejected. (Ophi) Necrofantasia Okay, Gundam has basically done all my work for me with his review. He hit it pretty much nail on. I'm honestly torn about this file so Maybe/Pending until I hear from TranceCore. (Scylaax) Nothing Beats Pretty good jack theory. Hands seem overused at times. The beginning of the solo isn't straight 16ths, listen a bit more carefully. Regardless, Accepted (Ophi) Phantom Ensemble Good file overall that could be fixed up to be a bit more relevant (pitch relevancy in the solo could have been better, overall hand abuse.) Maybe/Pending (Wineandbread) Poquito Mas Surprisingly decent. Freezes at the end were not needed. 48th trills are also insane compared to the rest of the file. Fix that and I'd accept. Maybe/Pending (CBR) Rawest Forest See Kommisar's notes. He nailed it. Maybe/Pending (Ophi) The Flameout Wow either I'm lazy as hell today or Gundam's doing a really good job. Probably both hahaa. File isn't anything special sorry dude :sad face: Rejected. (Scylaax) Tick Okay this wasn't a short file hehe. Not a bad file but lacks a bit of zest for me as well as feeling rather unpolished. Not that it's not well made, but it's a bit of a toughie to read. Maybe/Pending

09-13-2009, 07:21 AM	#729
Rin-Dude Banned Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 87	Re: XOON 4 submissions open acid vision: repetitive, but well made and makes a fun MA file. accep horatio: technically correct, but not a huge fan of the whole file being guitar trills with jumpstream. rejec necrofantasia: you sure like one handed trills lmao. found this one fun despite being a tad overlayered. accep nothing beats: just when i thought people forgot about jack theory. this one wins my heart. accep phantom ensemble: very fun file. solo kinda reminded me of my tigre bianca for some reason lmao. accep rawest forest: file does have fun value i wont deny that. has a very ffr-esque feel to it. change the 32nd trills and that jump jack leading to a jack on the same note, alternate them so that the jumps are on [12] and the single note jack lands on 3 or 4 at least so its not aids to hit. neds fixin the flameout: AAA'd if that means anything. song feels rather short and repetitive, dont think i see myself accepting this one. Tick: not too sure about this one. had fun parts, had boring parts etc. ill wait for other judges before making a final judgment

09-13-2009, 08:19 AM	#730
Patashu FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: we traced the call...it's coming from inside the house Age: 35 Posts: 8,609	Re: XOON 4 submissions open lazily submitted to make the end of battle started neu lol __________________ Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker: http://soundcloud.com/patashu/8bit-progressive-metal-fading-world http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/smallpackbanner.png Best non-AAAs: ERx8 v2 (14-1-0-4), Hajnal (3-0-0-0), RunnyMorning (8-0-0-4), Xeno-Flow (1-0-0-3), Blue Rose (35-2-0-20), Ketsarku (14-0-0-0), Silence (1-0-0-0), Lolo (14-1-0-1) http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee301/xiaoven/solorulzsig.png Last edited by Patashu; 09-13-2009 at 08:59 AM..

09-13-2009, 10:15 AM	#731
stargroup FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 974	Re: XOON 4 submissions open WHY DO YOU GUYS RESTEP EVERYTHING there is a necrofantasia file in dcp already, so what makes you guys think it's a good idea to restep it __________________ (´･ω･`)

09-13-2009, 10:49 AM	#733
Mollocephalus Custom User Title Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Italy Age: 37 Posts: 2,608	Re: XOON 4 submissions open shud i submit to this pack

09-13-2009, 10:49 AM	#734
xferrarix FFR Player Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Spring Hill Age: 33 Posts: 1,091	Re: XOON 4 submissions open i'm submitting chrome gadget v2 just for the heck of it, dunno if u guys will like it or not. edit: pretty much its got jack theory, fun as before, with some freezes and triples added in. along with small fixes i didn't notice before. Last edited by xferrarix; 09-13-2009 at 10:51 AM..

09-13-2009, 10:50 AM	#735
Rin-Dude Banned Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 87	Re: XOON 4 submissions open maybe necrofantasia is not the same song......ps ophi is an otakus drem guy instead of chrome gadge why dont you step my 8bit mix of it thats obv way better and necros hurry and submit =x Last edited by Rin-Dude; 09-13-2009 at 10:57 AM..

09-13-2009, 11:02 AM	#736
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09-13-2009, 11:07 AM	#737
Rin-Dude Banned Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 87	Re: XOON 4 submissions open your family hates you

09-13-2009, 11:17 AM	#738
xferrarix FFR Player Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Spring Hill Age: 33 Posts: 1,091	Re: XOON 4 submissions open you shut your whore mouth when billy mays is talking

09-13-2009, 11:38 AM	#739
Rin-Dude Banned Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 87	Re: XOON 4 submissions open they still hate u

09-13-2009, 12:05 PM	#740
Coolboyrulez0 VICES Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Germany Age: 32 Posts: 10,042	Re: XOON 4 submissions open made rawest less aids and also added some missing 16ths Should be good now. also, IF i have time to finish I will submit my m1dy file hehe (don't hate on the song choice) __________________ https://soundcloud.com/cbrbreakcore https://cbrrecords.bandcamp.com/

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