TaiyakiTime needs some helpful feedback

[Taiyakitime]

Hey everyone,

I just would like to get some informational, or positive feedback that may help improve my simfiles.
-If they are good, thanks.
-If they could use improvements, please suggest some.
-If they're horrible, I'm not going to listen to them due to the fact that I'm just starting and I would much rather have help becoming a decent simfile-maker than have nothing to go with besides "your simfiles are trash".*
*Think about it.

Anyways the main file I'm seeking help would be
Tomadoi Bitter Tune
Nogizaka Haruka no Himitsu Opening Theme
http://www.mediafire.com/?utnqeyicmrm

Feel free to look at my other simfiles
http://www.mediafire.com/TaiyakiTime

Thanks for the time and effort for anyone who helps!
Taiyakitime

[shinobi96]

It was pretty good. The only thing I'd mention is that sometimes in the verse I couldn't tell what you were stepping your 16th notes to. It was also pretty easy, but that might just be me. Other than that it was a fairly good file.

-shinobi