Floaty clothing

[Renevatia]

i think i will mainly focus on japanese, korean dresses.
imo they look best.
floaty looking ones, because they show motion more..
need some comments, suggestions, crits, or good refs that looks nice ;D


'Drawing' ~~a blade, i kinda like the pose, but didn't have time to finish at the time i drew it, so just put it off as a doodle..and layered it with texture.


this is wip for 'Birth', i most likely wont be making any large changes to the lineart, but point out any..awkward stuff that you see anyway, it helps me as a reference for future stuff.



0yes i am too lazy to reach for the shift key0
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ps. balls of fury/ping pong (movies) are epic, makes me wanna play more ping pong

[darkshark]

This type of stuff doesn't seem to be out of your comfort zone at all. It doesn't look like anything special yet. I know you can do better

[dean_machine]

It seems weird to me that the sleeves on the wip one are not hanging down, but suspended in the air. That's all that I can critique for now, they look great.

[Renevatia]

Originally Posted by darkshark

This type of stuff doesn't seem to be out of your comfort zone at all. It doesn't look like anything special yet. I know you can do better

lol ..ya.., but worry not, my comfort zone is currently getting bombarded by charcoal in art 101 class for college reqs.

no idea why they make as draw in charcoal.. =.=

[darkshark]

Because charcoal is fecking awesome that's why.

[Renevatia]

Originally Posted by darkshark

Because charcoal is fecking awesome that's why.

willow or vine is okay..but compressed charcoal is just gay D: , its like a freaking 15mm permanent marker that smears like nuts

drawing with that thing is like..trying to pad ROTA

[darkshark]

I did these in charcoal a long while back. Just gotta know how to work with it I guess, use the smudges to your advantage.






I like your color shading by the way, and that goes for pretty much anything you do, you've really got that down pretty well. However, I would like to see the line drawings from the sketch stage cleaned up a little more in the final product. Other than that it came out good.

[Syhto]

The stances and proportions are kind of awkward (especially on the first), but as far as proportions go it may just be a style thing.

Speaking of the clothes only I think they look really nice, and flow well.

[Renevatia]

Originally Posted by darkshark

I like your color shading by the way, and that goes for pretty much anything you do, you've really got that down pretty well. However, I would like to see the line drawings from the sketch stage cleaned up a little more in the final product. Other than that it came out good.

hmm lineart..i try to finish all lineart in one layer and never reline it over sketch and color accordingly, instead of going in and clean every lime to match perfectly end to end. I like dynamic over neatness xD. rather have it (attempt) float than looking like i just colored in a 'how to draw manga' coloring practice book.