Astral Feelings - Emotional Orchestral

**DarkbearX** · 08-20-2008, 12:10 AM

The piano at the beginning sounds like it needs to be quantized, bad. Also, as hi19 said, it needs to be more dynamic/humanized, it'll give a lot more emotion to it. The timpani-like toms you got going on are sort of random too and sound like they need to be quantized. Also, the song isn't completely finalized; open it up in audacity or something and amplify it to max volume.

The pianos seem a bit too compressed and loud, and the 'treble' piano and the 'bass' piano are clashing; are they the same channel? If so, separate them so you can make one more towards the bass end and one more towards the treble end.

The arrangement and melody are really sweet though. Great job on this man! (:

08-20-2008, 12:10 AM	#4
DarkbearX Shimose Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Where you live Posts: 1,995	Re: Astral Feelings - Emotional Orchestral The piano at the beginning sounds like it needs to be quantized, bad. Also, as hi19 said, it needs to be more dynamic/humanized, it'll give a lot more emotion to it. The timpani-like toms you got going on are sort of random too and sound like they need to be quantized. Also, the song isn't completely finalized; open it up in audacity or something and amplify it to max volume. The pianos seem a bit too compressed and loud, and the 'treble' piano and the 'bass' piano are clashing; are they the same channel? If so, separate them so you can make one more towards the bass end and one more towards the treble end. The arrangement and melody are really sweet though. Great job on this man! (: __________________ im gay SRL Page Castlevania IV, Super Metroid, and Cave Story speedruns D e e R F o r C e Leaderboards

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