Sweatervest -- A short story (caution: sexual orientation-ness)

[Kamunt]

Thank you for the critique, I think. At the end, he sees himself as being different, seeing his clothing through a different lens because he begins to seriously doubt himself. Whether or not Soren is gay isn't what's important, but what he sees is himself in a different light. He sees his clothing in how he would see himself if he truly were gay. He doesn't know for sure, but the seed of doubt is well planted.

Also, obligatory "I'd like to see you do better" inserted here. I appreciate the criticism because it tells me what to improve on, but really, harsh much? I'm not George Orwell's understudy here.